Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The author concludes that Palean baskets might have also been made outside of the ancient city of Palean. He or She uses the discovery of a Palean basket in Lithos as evidence to support this statement. However, the writer makes several major assumptions that need to be addressed before anthropologists accept or reject the argument.
Firts, the author assumes that no boats existed in Palean. However, the fact that no boats have been found in archeological explorations does not prove that they did not exist. Many of the objects and traditions of these ancient cities have been lost to the passage of time, and this could be the case of boats. Archeologist keep finding traces of sailboats among many ancient settlements, where no other evidence of sailing had been found before.
Furthermore, the writer does not consider other plausible explanations why the Palean basket was found in Lithos. He assumes that the basket was created in Lithos, but it could have reached this site after drifting in the river. Water currents are often unpredictible, bringing items to our shores from all around the world. For example, recent remains of a ship sailing by Greenland were found in the Spanish sea line. If these objects traveled all the way from Greenland to Europe, it is definitely possible that the basket had drifted across the Brim river several centuries ago.
Finally, the article assumes that the Palean basket came to being in Lithos several centuries ago. However, the basket could have been created in Palean back in that era, but it could have been transported to Lithos after several years. Once commerce in the region was widespread.
To sum up, the author presents a potentially good conclusion that explains why the Paleos basket was found in Lithos. However, the writer should present more evidence to support this statement to make it persuasive. Without further proof, the readers should be hesitant to believe it wholeheartedly.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 322 350
No. of Characters: 1591 1500
No. of Different Words: 166 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.236 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.941 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.528 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.988 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.611 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.554 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.091 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 238, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nsported to Lithos after several years. Once commerce in the region was widespread. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 322.0 441.139720559 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12111801242 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61404546088 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527950310559 0.468620217663 113% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8792037189 57.8364921388 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.6111111111 119.503703932 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 23.324526521 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.70786347227 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231694198239 0.218282227539 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723369238304 0.0743258471296 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692477811722 0.0701772020484 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135743607681 0.128457276422 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520270021612 0.0628817314937 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.3550499002 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 98.500998004 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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