Issue Essay:-
People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
It is not uncommon for people to take their decision based on emotions, as they have a dogma that taking decisions based on emotions is a trait of good decision maker. This content seems to be correct up to a certain extent, as taking decisions just on the basis of emotional grounds doesn't always produce good results for future. Appropriate decisions are the ones which are taken through proper brainstorming and firmness, there is, no need to give any justification for them as one sees all aspects not just emotion before taking the decision. If one is taking a decision and then oscillating aro...
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