In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as hero.
The given statement is well written as media’s intensive coverage made happen things such that it is no longer possible to regard any living man or woman as hero.
Beginning with, there are several ways through which public get to know about the current affairs going in our country. For example, previously there was newspaper as well magazine; now these mediums have made progress and now it is TV,social media etc. As there are more and more ways coming up to distribute any famous thing, it is likely to be possible that all that information reach to public may not be pure truth.
Media's intension is to spread any news which can gain public's attention. There is a bit interesting compitition going on among news channels. All they want to do is how to make their channel popular. People can have their different choice like some may like to watch the news like scandal affair in some state; other may like to watch about the accomplishment about the sports. What media aims is quite simple, which topic can capture most people's attention.
Allthough the media gives intense coverage to some trivial topic. Like some celebrity has fever; media elaborates such a small thing into very serious matter. Moving forward, if there is a public figure who has done some work for public welfare then they appreciate it, but when it comes to that public figure's minor offense media just malign whole character. As we all know Superstar Salman Khan, he has done notable work for public welfare but when people came to know about his case of drunk drive; all of a sudden people just abhore him. His image suddenly fell down from hero to zero. In this scenario media played a well role by exagrrating story.
Continuing with, the tacit fact is that authenticity is not at all preserved due to the qualiy of vehement media coverage. Some celebrities as well as politians are unable to live their private life peacefully. Media reaches anywhere it may be airport or funeral. Besides this, I have noticed that the cases of the bad things happening in the society is given tremendous importance where as efforts of good things are just whishwashed. This quality makes media more mallicious.
Therefore I conclude that in this age of strong influence of media, it is not at all possible for a society to regard any human as hero.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80893300248 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44019654301 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565756823821 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4262556238 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1904761905 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47619047619 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306736411633 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861773197467 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112828552542 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200725863395 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154278148847 0.0667264976115 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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