The issue that luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life is an contentious issue. Personally, i reckon to the second sentance of the issue given, that the luxuries develop people independent. In convencing the luxuries people can save money and use for their needs in future. Ferthermore, people who convence in luxuries can help others in finantial things and moreover people learn to adjust for their life. Luxuries makes people selfish and independent individuals.
Firstly, people can save money for their future use when they used to convence their luxury life. Consider the general things that happens in our house in every day life, now a days people are hobbied for the luxury life in this generation people need car and ac to live their better life, but if we convence in these kind of things they can learn the difficulty of life. The responsibility will be gain by the difficulty of life and this will be gained by the convenience of luxuryness.
Moreover, the people will help each other when they are in need. if the people convence in their luxury life they can help people really who are in need, in our country there many poor people who dont have food to eat, if we help those people we will get satisfaction and this will be the most valueble thing than leading a luxury life. So the younger can learn good things like sharing from your things and they will try to do such things when they grown up.
Mainly people learn to adjusting to their life. the people who spent their life very rich and luxury can not lead their life without some luxury things and the people who lead their life normally can lead their life in any kind of situation, so this will help people to live in any phase or in any difficulty of the life. Adjusting to life can only learn when people used to convenience to the luxury life.
In conclusion, we have many advantages for convencing to luxury life, like savage of money and helping reach other in need, Moreover people can learn adjusting to the life. So i believe that convencing for luxury life is entirely harmless.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nd conveniences of contemporary life is an contentious issue. Personally, i reckon...
^^
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...fe is an contentious issue. Personally, i reckon to the second sentance of the is...
^
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... can save money and use for their needs in future. Ferthermore, people who convence in lu...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...eneral things that happens in our house in every day life, now a days people are hobbied for...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...happens in our house in every day life, now a days people are hobbied for the luxury life ...
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Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...heir better life, but if we convence in these kind of things they can learn the difficult...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ife, but if we convence in these kind of things they can learn the difficulty of ...
^^
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... help each other when they are in need. if the people convence in their luxury lif...
^^
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... our country there many poor people who dont have food to eat, if we help those peop...
^^^^
Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...eople learn to adjusting to their life. the people who spent their life very rich a...
^^^
Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to adjust'.
Suggestion: to adjust
...ther in need, Moreover people can learn adjusting to the life. So i believe that convenci...
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Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ple can learn adjusting to the life. So i believe that convencing for luxury life...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, so, i reckon, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69398907104 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40856564161 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.396174863388 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5783688879 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316010179729 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153988234487 0.0831039109588 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489005082373 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222872782601 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338308023638 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nd conveniences of contemporary life is an contentious issue. Personally, i reckon...
^^
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...fe is an contentious issue. Personally, i reckon to the second sentance of the is...
^
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... can save money and use for their needs in future. Ferthermore, people who convence in lu...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...eneral things that happens in our house in every day life, now a days people are hobbied for...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...happens in our house in every day life, now a days people are hobbied for the luxury life ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...heir better life, but if we convence in these kind of things they can learn the difficult...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ife, but if we convence in these kind of things they can learn the difficulty of ...
^^
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... help each other when they are in need. if the people convence in their luxury lif...
^^
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... our country there many poor people who dont have food to eat, if we help those peop...
^^^^
Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...eople learn to adjusting to their life. the people who spent their life very rich a...
^^^
Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to adjust'.
Suggestion: to adjust
...ther in need, Moreover people can learn adjusting to the life. So i believe that convenci...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ple can learn adjusting to the life. So i believe that convencing for luxury life...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, so, i reckon, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69398907104 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40856564161 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.396174863388 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5783688879 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316010179729 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153988234487 0.0831039109588 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489005082373 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222872782601 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338308023638 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.