"In any enterprise, the process of making or doing something is ultimately more important than the final product."
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion expressed above. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
The claim that in any enterprise, the process of making or doing something is ultimately more important than the final product, plays on the idea that in many situations the spirit in which something is done is pivotal. This idea is familiar to most people. In this statement I will argue that, while in most cases the process is a necessary precondition for a good product, ultimately it is the product itself, which is more important, rather than the process by which it is produced.
An argument in favor of process oriented thinking, which at first glance seems convincing, can be illustrated very well by an every day situation most people are familiar with: going to the hair dresser. If the process of getting your hair cut is unpleasant then you are more likely to be unhappy with the overall result. On the contrary, if you had a pleasant conversation and the overall experience was enjoyable, one would be willing to pay a higher price. This principle is transferrable to most services. Similarly, if one goes to the doctor it is not only important that the final outcome is satisfactory, but also that one feels well advised and being taken care of by competent staff. While at first glance, this seems to be a strong argument for more process oriented thinking, I would argue that in a service situation the way in which something is done is part of the product, since it is part of the customer experience. Other aspects of the process which are not part of the customer experience, but part of the process leading up to delivering the service, are not usually considered by customers to be important. For example I would not care if my hair dresser is in a poor mood, in the afternoon when he/she is cleaning up the shop, even though this is certainly part of the process. Therefore, only aspects of the production process which can be attributed directly to the consumer experience are relevant, because they are part of the product itself.
Another easily undermined argument in favor of the importance of processes is that processes often are determining the extent of external effects, which are often taken into account by customers. For example if a piece of clothing is produced with the use of child labour. The negative external effects on the children having to work in a factory are somewhat taken into account by customers, if the information is known to the customer, and the customer as a result is less likely to buy the product. However, there are many situations, where despite the process of generating a product causing adverse external effects, such a the environmental impacts of the mining of precious metals needed for the production of consumer electronics, consumers still purchase these products in abundance. I would argue that if the quality of a product is truly superior to the quality of its rival products most consumers do not care enough about the negative aspects of the production process for their consumption decision to be affected by it. To illustrate this point by a large scale phenomena: I can hardly imagine why every year billions of animals are killed in Europe alone, if the process of producing a product, in this case meat, was more important than the product itself. If the process was more important, surely no one would eat meat.
To me it seems to be clear that, the process by which a product is produced is important, since consumers care about them to some extent, but the qualities of the product itself are even more important. Who after all would by a product produced with an impeccable process, but for which there is no use?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'an everyday'?
Suggestion: an everyday
...incing, can be illustrated very well by an every day situation most people are familiar with...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...miliar with: going to the hair dresser. If the process of getting your hair cut is...
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Line 4, column 628, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
... causing adverse external effects, such a the environmental impacts of the mining of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, after all, for example, as a result, in most cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 50.0 19.5258426966 256% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2983.0 2235.4752809 133% => OK
No of words: 623.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78812199037 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99599519102 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71626080378 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 961.2 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.10617977528 386% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8640402996 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.047619048 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248573011038 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083614252233 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716608518982 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183900990161 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573256409379 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.