In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Expert in a field is someone who has complete knowledge and has a perception of what is going on while doing something new. On the other hand beginner is someone who is limited in overall knowledge and just know rudimentory stuff. The prompt recommends that beginner is more liable to contribute in a field than the expert one. In my opinion, I mostly disagree with the prompt's statement for two reasons.
In real world nothing is like chance or hit and trial, there is some underlying background which give rise to some phenomena and it is concrete not like some fables. For instance, Newton developed whole calculus and he was an expert. He has immense contribution in the field of physics, mathematics and thermodynamics, etc. It is true that the apple hit his head by chance but by no means he was beginner. Another thing with beginner is that they are more likely to cause blunder. For instance, if beginner was doing research with the radioactive material he/she can cause widespread tumult by promoting radioactive material as a decorative item. This has happen in England few centuries ago when women do make up with substance that causes cancer but was promoted as a cosmetic product.
I know there are some people who argue that neutrons was discovered by beginner. However, people can do discoveries by chance but that does not mean they are beginners. They are experts in their field that just don't have knowledge of what they are going to discover. Even Rutherford's plum pudding model of atom was work of a scientist himself who is not by any metric beginner.
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- The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals 50
- In any field of inquiry the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'prompts'' or 'prompt's'?
Suggestion: prompts'; prompt's
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Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...material as a decorative item. This has happen in England few centuries ago when women...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, another thing, for instance, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 272.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8125 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6715548547 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569852941176 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4663019672 60.3974514979 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.2666666667 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22975114809 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770274066316 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100027138518 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145868105513 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648805908645 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.