"In any realm of life---whether academic, social, business, or political---the only way to succeed is to take a practical, rather than an idealistic, point of view. Pragmatic behavior guarantees survival, whereas idealistic views tend to be superseded by simpler, more immediate options."
It is often said that ' we should dream big to achieve success in life. It is true that while deciding your goals in life, one must look at a bigger picture and set up goals that may be beyond his capabilities. But, taking a practical approach would help him take a look at the existing reality and make decisions accordingly. The prompt suggests that in any realm of life, the only way to succeed is to adopt a practical approach. I believe that one must adopt a pragmatic approach to achieve success and excellence. My viewpoints are aptly illustrated through the below-mentioned examples.
Firstly, adopting a pragmatic approach leads to rational and logical thinking which is important to the completion of any task. Thinking idealistically, might not help in extrapolating the challenges that could be faced during the course of completing any task or achieving any goal. For instance, any politician or leader may adopt a quixotic project only to gain favor and support from the general public. He would adopt this immediate option so that he can win votes during the election process. He may give promises of implementing massive projects such as the construction of a large number of highways to eradicate the existing problem of traffic in the city. But if the government does not have enough funds to promote this idea, then the leader would fail to keep his promise as well as would lose the people's trust. Therefore, by not deliberating over the issue and thinking about its consequences, the leader would not ab able to succeed in his attempt to eradicate traffic-related issues. Therefore, one should adopt a pragmatic approach while solving any problem.
However, in contrast to the above statement, while thinking pragmatically one would underestimate his abilities and won't strive to achieve bigger goals and dreams. Adopting an idealistic approach while setting the goals will help in motivating the individual to work harder to achieve that goal. For instance, students in many educational institutes are suggested to dream big and imagine themselves at being at the topmost position in any particular field of study. This mechanism helps in encouraging students to plan for the methods which can help them in achieving their goals and helps in providing a direction to their lives. By adopting idealistic goals accompanied by a pragmatic approach to achieve these goals could ensure the success of the individual.
To sum up, although looking at a particular situation idealistically can help in motivating the person to achieve his dreams, only by adopting a pragmatic
strategy can help in ensuring success. This is because having a pragmatic point of view helps in thinking logically as well as considering the pros and cons of any issue. Idealistic views tend to be superseded by simpler and immediate options that lead to only a temporary success
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in contrast, such as, as well as, in contrast to, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2451.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04320987654 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84290672693 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502057613169 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 771.3 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1144580076 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.714285714 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.21951772744 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167474282414 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060385898282 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725840677139 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116943828056 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677359795894 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.