Claim: Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
Reason: We are not able to make connections between current events and past events until we have some distance from both.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Sometimes looking back to the mistakes made in past, can lead to making effective decisions in the present. The past experiences can help us to evaluate the current situation better, and hence lead to an improved decision making power which will sometimes have a positive effect on individual. However, in most cases when past events tends to have a negative effect on that person, it is prudent to have disregard for the past events and focus more on the current scenario as we need to maintain some distance between the two .Hence I partially agree with the author's claim that since we cannot make a connection between the past events and the current ones until we keep a distance between the two,therefore past cannot help make people to make important decisions today.
Firstly,looking back at the past experiences is what makes people realize any mistakes that have happened before and thus deliberate the current scenario and accordingly, take better decisions.When we have to deal with a situation which is similar in many aspects to that happened in the past, we can easily correlate between them and hence make a much improved and effective decision.For instance,when two nations have some kind of hostility between them, that increases to such an extent that, one of them decides to attack the other by armed forces, then this would create a situation analougous to that of the word war two that was held in 1945.The countries that have decided to create this kind of war can base their decisions based on the previous events.By looking at the previous wars they can probably get aware of the fact that such wars results into nothing but mass destruction and is categorically futile.Thus they can make the decsions accordingly, and instead of a war, find some other means that could restore the friendly relations among them.
However,in contrast to the above statement, sometimes past experiences can incite a negative feeling in an individual, which can hamper his decision making power to a large extent.Futhermore, its nescessary to have distance between both the present and past events in this case.For instance, a badminton player had to experience lots of negative experiences in the past related to her childhood which had made her lose the confidence and determination to fight.In present scenario when she has regained her confidence back and is ready to make important decisions such as playing in the olympics, then she must not let her past expereinces meddle with the current ones, to prevent any kind of negative impact on her decsions.
To sum up,unless the past experiences have a negative impact on the person's mind, its always beneficial to look back into the past events and evaluate your decsions.To determine correlation between both of them, can lead to much efficient decisions which could lead to even greater and satisfactory results in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in contrast, kind of, such as, in contrast to, in most cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 91.0 58.6224719101 155% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2412.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 477.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05660377358 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8077939974 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465408805031 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 759.6 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 23.0359550562 343% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 329.358678175 60.3974514979 545% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 402.0 118.986275619 338% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.5 23.4991977007 338% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.6666666667 5.21951772744 549% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392038972872 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224898630015 0.0831039109588 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143141699736 0.0758088955206 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252768421462 0.150359130593 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145656119921 0.0667264976115 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.2 14.1392134831 298% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.71 48.8420337079 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 12.1743820225 280% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.9 8.38706741573 130% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 33.6 11.2143820225 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 34.0 11.7820224719 289% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.