In order for any work of art — for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song — to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Most of the times, any work our art must be created in a way that it should have greater impact on the society.The evaluation of the significance of any film, poem, song can be done by taking into consideration that how much impactful has it been in creating beneficial changes in the society.However, it cannot be limited to this narrow scope , as art itself is an infinite domain with many factors to be considered while it is being judged.It is an amalgamation of creativity and knowledge which can be an esoteric subject. Hence, it cannot be concluded that any work of art has merit only if it is understandable to most people.
A work of art has various elements which determine its creativity and uniqueness. Sometimes, art is valued on the basis of its uniqueness over other pieces of art work or on how much effort has the artist put in in order to create that piece of art.In this case the piece of art work is significantly valued, even if the art is understood by just a few people.For instance, consider most of the paintings that are present in the art galleries.Often, the general public isn't able to interpret them and often mock at the basicness of the painting.This is because they are not really aware of the meaning behind the painting and what it really indicates.But there exists a few experts, who can instantly understand the significance of any piece of art work and hence, it is these complex paintings, which are actually sold at tremendously high prices. Similarily, consider any art film, which does not go hit and popular when it is first released.But these films contain such strong and powerful messages and have such great direction skills that the ones who are aware of their significance rate it higher than the usual.For example, the films made my the Indian director Satyajit Ray, were not undertstood by the general public of 1980s.They often interpreted his films as a motive to defy their laws and traditions.However, the same director has recieved an Oscar for his films that indicated the greatness of his work.Thus any work of an art need not be given merit simply because it is understood by the general public.
However,in contrast to the above statement, it is true that many poems,films and novels have tried to depict the social conditions existing in the society and have thus made a large contribution in developing the existing conditions of the society. For instance, a patriotic poem written by an author can gain immense popularity due to its message and its power to incite great deals of partiotism in the general public. Or consider, a film which was based on Anandi Gopal,the first female doctor in India.This film was designed to inspire young girls to achieve their dreams. Normally, people from the villages and countryside are narrow-minded and illiterate and do not allow girls to obtain education.Thus the film must be directed in such a way that even these people can easily interpret its meaning and hence get influenced by it.It would be futile if the film was too complex to be understood and thus cannot have any impact on these people.
To sum up, although it is in most of the cases necessary for a film, song, or poem to be understood by the general population in order to have a greater impact on them, but it is not always necessary to judge the film only on this basis as it would be unfair for the other piece of art work who are also significant in terms of their creativity and uniqueness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, really, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, in contrast to, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 19.5258426966 195% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2834.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 597.0 442.535393258 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74706867672 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94303383012 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93779615561 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458961474037 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 914.4 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 99.0 23.0359550562 430% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 474.421899673 60.3974514979 785% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 472.333333333 118.986275619 397% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 99.5 23.4991977007 423% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.3333333333 5.21951772744 447% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 7.80617977528 423% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304343046444 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180293522981 0.0831039109588 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307494324014 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202749393031 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302080675359 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 50.7 14.1392134831 359% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -20.55 48.8420337079 -42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.7 12.1743820225 334% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.96 8.38706741573 143% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 41.6 11.2143820225 371% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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