The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin.
The author states that the illegal immigrants should be sent back to their country of origin as they may posses a threat to the country's economy and national identity. The author's statement may be true but it contains lack of sufficient data to support the correspoding stand.
Firstly, the author states that the autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders. It is not true for every country. Many of the country's autonomy may be based on their exports and imports or their tourism. For example, Dubai's autonomy is based on their tourism and not on their borders. People dont have to face cumbersome border checks in order to enter Dubai. Europe's autonomy is not based on the strength of it's borders as tourists can travel different parts of Europe via roads.
Secondly, the author mentions that if the illegal immigrants are not checked then it might put a risk on their economy and national identity. This statement is flawed as the illegal immigrants might increase the economy by getting involved in small paying jobs that the country requires. So, eventaully it would increase the country's economy.
If the country decides to pin point every illegal immigrant and make arrangements to return to their country, that would take a lot of effort and costs and eventually it would damage the country's economies and it's corresponding vital resources in doing so.
So, to conclude, the argument stated by the author contains many loop holes that needs to be filled with proper evidence and reasoning. Hence, it does not make up a convincing argument.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...trys economy and national identity. The authors statement may be true but it contains l...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ourism and not on their borders. People dont have to face cumbersome border checks i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 266.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95112781955 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53649098835 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522556390977 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.416834177 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0714285714 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384376837288 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122230106909 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905943721206 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190391681119 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876759152494 0.0667264976115 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.