People in modern society have to face with a huge different problems and they can not stop trying to work harder to get better day by day. This is the main reason to answer for the question why do people increasingly eat at restaurants? It is more convenient way for people when they want to eat delicious dishes and save times at the same time. Therefore, people have more requires for restaurants and one of them is restaurants should display nutritional information about the meals they serve.
In these days, people tend to eat fast food or go to restaurant because they do not have enough time to cook for themselves and family, or even they are too tired to cook after a long working day. Eating in restaurant is the best choice for them in some situations and they can enjoy meals without feeling tired. However, how can they know the dishes they eat every day are healthy or not? They can not know about the nutritional values or source of ingredients of dishes they eat until restaurants display nutritional information about the meals they serve. It is their rights and they should be informed about the nutritional information about their meals. People pay for it and they have the right to choose healthy choices to make sure they eat fresh food. People can also realize whether they have healthy diet or unhealthy diet thanks to disclosure nutritional information. It has positive effect on reducing health problems, which cause by diet, such as heart attack, stomach pain, etc.
Disclosure nutritional information about food not only affects customer but also brings to restaurants various problems and benefits. Restaurants will have to spend a huge percentage of profit and lots of time to buy fresh meat, vegetables and spices. They also have to make sure that there is no mistake in choosing ingredients and cooking process and the information in menus are true. It will take times and efforts to serve healthy meals with fresh and selective ingredients for their patrons but it is worth. This makes the restaurant is different from others and helps to attract little by little customers come to eat at the restaurant. Customers understand clearly that they can believe in this restaurant because they are informed about nutritional information of what they eat. Moreover, restaurants can guarantee the quality with their patrons and have more and more customers by doing this.
In conclusion, it is necessary for all restaurants to disclose nutritional information about the meals they serve to assure the quality of food ingredients. It plays an important role to the restaurant's success and contributes to people's health by helping to choose healthy choices that is suit each person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'restaurants'' or 'restaurant's'?
Suggestion: restaurants'; restaurant's
...ents. It plays an important role to the restaurants success and contributes to peoples heal...
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Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
... restaurants success and contributes to peoples health by helping to choose healthy cho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 11.1786427146 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 28.8173652695 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 55.5748502994 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 2260.96107784 100% => OK
No of words: 454.0 441.139720559 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97797356828 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67511534631 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 204.123752495 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460352422907 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.96107784431 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5730499591 57.8364921388 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.619047619 119.503703932 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.619047619 23.324526521 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38095238095 5.70786347227 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.20758483034 183% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455904605664 0.218282227539 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151127296113 0.0743258471296 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839310557101 0.0701772020484 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295082013554 0.128457276422 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548481256488 0.0628817314937 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.3799401198 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.32208582834 88% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 98.500998004 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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