People in modern society have to face with a huge different problems and they can not stop trying to work harder to get better day by day. This is the main reason to answer for the question why do people increasingly eat at restaurants? It is more convenient way for people when they want to eat delicious dishes and save times at the same time. Therefore, people have more requires for restaurants and one of them is restaurants should display nutritional information about the meals they serve.
In these days, people tend to eat fast food or go to restaurant because they do not have enough time to cook for themselves and family, or even they are too tired to cook after a long working day. Eating in restaurant is the best choice for them in some situations and they can enjoy meals without feeling tired. However, how can they know the dishes they eat every day are healthy or not? They can not know about the nutritional values or source of ingredients of dishes they eat until restaurants display nutritional information about the meals they serve. It is their rights and they should be informed about the nutritional information about their meals. People pay for it and they have the right to choose healthy choices to make sure they eat fresh food. People can also realize whether they have healthy diet or unhealthy diet thanks to disclosure nutritional information. It has positive effect on reducing health problems, which cause by diet, such as heart attack, stomach pain, etc.
Disclosure nutritional information about food not only affects customer but also brings to restaurants various problems and benefits. Restaurants will have to spend a huge percentage of profit and lots of time to buy fresh meat, vegetables and spices. They also have to make sure that there is no mistake in choosing ingredients and cooking process and the information in menus are true. It will take times and efforts to serve healthy meals with fresh and selective ingredients for their patrons but it is worth. This makes the restaurant is different from others and helps to attract little by little customers come to eat at the restaurant. Customers understand clearly that they can believe in this restaurant because they are informed about nutritional information of what they eat. Moreover, restaurants can guarantee the quality with their patrons and have more and more customers by doing this.
In conclusion, it is necessary for all restaurants to disclose nutritional information about the meals they serve to assure the quality of food ingredients. It plays an important role to the restaurant's success and contributes to people's health by helping to choose healthy choices that is suit each person.
- Some people believe that Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults Do you agree or disagree 69
- TV is for entertainment not for education To what extent do you agree with this statement 87
- The ability to learn more than one language will be less important in the future. Do you agree or disagree? 78
- Because people increasingly eat at restaurant, all restaurants should be required to display nutritional information about the meals they serve. This knowledge makes it easier for diners to make healthy choices and reduces the risk of diet related health 50
- Because people increasingly eat at restaurant, all restaurants should be required to display nutritional information about the meals they serve. This knowledge makes it easier for diners to make healthy choices and reduces the risk of diet related health 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 994, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...such as heart attack, stomach pain, etc. Disclosure nutritional information about...
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'restaurants'' or 'restaurant's'?
Suggestion: restaurants'; restaurant's
...ents. It plays an important role to the restaurants success and contributes to peoples heal...
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Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
... restaurants success and contributes to peoples health by helping to choose healthy cho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2262.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 454.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98237885463 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67511534631 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460352422907 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5730499591 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.714285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.619047619 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38095238095 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455904605664 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151127296113 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839310557101 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295082013554 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548481256488 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.