The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things

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...ll around the world quoted ‘A successful business is driven by unique ideas not...
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...quoted ‘A successful business is driven by unique ideas not capital’. The autho...
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...r of the prompt suggests that such best ideas comes from a passionate interest from c...
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...ionate interest from common place things .In my opinion I’d mostly agree with the ...
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...nate interest from common place things .In my opinion I’d mostly agree with the au...
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...intillating business person Mr Jay Bezos ,who is currently the richest person in ...
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...le can buy products or services online. Before Mr jay came up with the idea of startin...
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...perated. Today what Mr jay Bezos runs is somewhat similar to the buying and selli...
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...g and selling aspects of a local market but however he came up with a platform in which peo...
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...om the convenience of their homes. Since Mr Bezos had a keen interest in the comm...
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...ed by the author can be seen evidential.Take for example professor albert Einstein ...
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...ho came up with the theory of relativity,which is considered to be one of the best ide...
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...ssionate interest in common place things,in most of the cases would be observed to...
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...ace things,in most of the cases would be observed to be true.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, thus, while, as to, for example, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7890625 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64970203934 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471354166667 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 23.0359550562 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.172263268 60.3974514979 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 229.875 118.986275619 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 48.0 23.4991977007 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 7.80617977528 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262467526642 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109722295703 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105810734244 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181362075283 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107099214294 0.0667264976115 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 14.1392134831 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.22 48.8420337079 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 12.1743820225 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.39 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 11.2143820225 189% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.