There is a notion that best thoughts are created due to obsession over daily stuff. Although I believe I mostly agree with this position, few exceptions still exist.
This idea is especially non-applicable for novel fields, where general population’s daily tasks exist. If we take the advancements in astronomical knowledge and pivotal points in its history as an example, we can clearly observe that best scientific ideas arise from tedious research work and scrupulous discussions of scientists who are not obsessed with finding answers to questions, instead doing their daily job.
However, if we take brilliant ideas which shaped current structure of our society, it is easy to detect that most essential ones are related to simply a person’s individual desire to achieve possibilities that can be observed in nature. For example, idea of a plane simply came from human’s obsession over motion of flying that he saw on daily basis while gazing birds in the sky. Thus, after many failed attempts, he did not give up, and continued due to his infinite desire to imitate a bird.
Another main argument supporting this notion is that brain is a complex organ which needs a motivation in order to give solutions to existing problems. This motivation simply can be granted by passionate interest in stuff surrounding us. There is even a saying that “obsession will take you further from discipline”, which I believe can be used regarding this position. Our brains need intrinsic desire to think and search about something as a fuel in order to come up with solutions.
In conclusion, although in certain cases, people without any passion about their jobs came up with solutions such as in scientific spheres, in most cases their desire to achieve new horizons and usage of this desire as fuel for their brains created current society which we live in.
- 1 quot Commuters complain that increased rush hour traffic on Blue Highway between the suburbs and the city center has doubled their commuting time The favored proposal of the motorists 039 lobby is to widen the highway adding an additional lane of 69
- Hospital statistics regarding people who go to the emergency room after roller skating accidents indicate the need for more protective equipment Within that group of people 75 percent of those who had accidents in streets or parking lots had not been we 68
- The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things 58
- 23 Governments should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and development 66
- In any field of inquiry the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions 66
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, still, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07817589577 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75690519705 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602605863192 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4213466397 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.916666667 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135293955749 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471831421784 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452665722497 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690559126945 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391701162681 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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