The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
To prepare the new generations of leaders cooperation is needed because for leadership to work the members of the team have to be prepared to work together, help each other and produce synergy inside the different companies or institutions.
Moreover, cooperation supposes a person a kind of altruism and asks oneself to put in the place of others, also to know how to communicate our own needs to our mates and listen to others' requests effectively facilitating the achievement of goals. All of these things are soft skills that all good leaders generally have.
Nevertheless, soft skills are not alone in the profile of a leader, hard skills such as analytical thinking, problem-solving, intelligence, and other abilities that government and other industries look up to in their bosses' search for their companies.
To develop hard skills, competition plays an important role, it leverages the abilities and talents of children and young people. This happens because human beings when founded in a competitive environment push themselves towards effectiveness, and rapid thinking, and activates certain attitudes in people that wouldn't arise in other conditions.
For instance, nowadays from a young age, we are faced with awards and acknowledgment just from our family or from our teachers, friends, and others. When we enter school there are competitions, contests, scholarships, awards, and other activities in which we are put to test in comparison to others which allows the formation of good skills in different aspects.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 313, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ivates certain attitudes in people that wouldnt arise in other conditions. For inst...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 241.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39834024896 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09782093587 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622406639004 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9651539816 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.625 118.986275619 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.125 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.21951772744 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172129281553 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639198810317 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385394511369 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859240213071 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336827670231 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 14.1392134831 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 313, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ivates certain attitudes in people that wouldnt arise in other conditions. For inst...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 241.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39834024896 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09782093587 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622406639004 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9651539816 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.625 118.986275619 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.125 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.21951772744 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172129281553 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639198810317 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385394511369 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859240213071 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336827670231 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 14.1392134831 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.