To inculcate values and prepare young minds for leadership in various fields through cooperation is one of the best way but not the only way to do so. Cooperation always brings out the quality of patience and ability collaborate with everyone around you which is necessary to bring out the best outcome in every situation. For a leader to lead he/she has to be thoughtful as they will responsible for every good or bad result which be yield out of the action of team/government/industry. Every leader should have the quality of how engage and convince everyone for the best decision by stating every facts and supporting arguments.
For example, if Harry is running an IT company to provide service , he is the face of the company which brings ample amount of responsibilities. Harry needs to be cogitative about every decision he will make as the output of it will directly affect his company. Consider , Harry has a client in UK and the client Mr. X needs 50 IT services from Harry's company but client is having a very low budget. There can be multiple scenarios here, majority members from Harry's team asks him to reject the offer as employees/company can't work for such low budget for 50 services. Rest of the team are in favor to have this client as it's a UK based firm, Harry's company will have good exposure in terms of connections, reach, technologies and will benefit the Harry's company's reputation as well. Now ultimately it's on Harry to decide. The important aspect here is to keep the team together and move forward with everyone and none should feel unheard. Harry decided to take the deal with Mr. X with certain conditions on agreement. Harry is accepting the client's offer to have potential life long client and steadily he will push the client to increase the budget by impressing the client with their services. But for initial 6 months Harry will payoff for the employees as budget is low from client before he can convince the client otherwise.
It implies a leader should always think about best win-win situation. In contrast , the given statement says that a leader shouldn't be competitive but to survive and get the best quality results a healthy competition is necessary either in government or industry. There should be someone who challenges your decision or actions which keeps a leader always in check about his/her every movement and repercussions of those movement. Not an aggressive competition but the one which thinks always about the welfare of people who are trusting these leadership.
Considering the above example, if there was any rival for Harry's company who could snatch this deal which would not only affect Harry's company's reputation & growth but also they would has lost an opportunity to beat their competitors.
Hence, cooperation is needed within the team and competition a healthy one is needed to always challenge the current leadership.
- Two years ago our consultants predicted that West Egg s landfill which is used for garbage disposal would be completely filled within five years During the past two years however town residents have been recycling twice as much aluminum and paper as they 77
- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company quot According to a recent report from our marketing department during the past year fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than 50
- Men and women because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks 54
- Manned space flight is costly and dangerous Moreover the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men 83
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disag 58
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...nts. For example, if Harry is running an IT company to provide service , he is the ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 40, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
... For example, if Harry is running an IT company to provide service , he is the face of ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...running an IT company to provide service , he is the face of the company which bri...
^^
Line 2, column 271, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ll directly affect his company. Consider , Harry has a client in UK and the client...
^^
Line 2, column 523, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...o reject the offer as employees/company cant work for such low budget for 50 service...
^^^^
Line 2, column 623, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...eam are in favor to have this client as its a UK based firm, Harrys company will ha...
^^^
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...bout best win-win situation. In contrast , the given statement says that a leader ...
^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
... the given statement says that a leader shouldnt be competitive but to survive and get t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this movement' or 'those movements'?
Suggestion: this movement; those movements
...her every movement and repercussions of those movement. Not an aggressive competition but the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'thinks'.
Suggestion: always thinks
...ggressive competition but the one which thinks always about the welfare of people who are tru...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this leadership' or 'these leaderships'?
Suggestion: this leadership; these leaderships
... the welfare of people who are trusting these leadership. Considering the above example, if the...
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Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...reputation & growth but also they would has lost an opportunity to beat their compe...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, as to, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2401.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 487.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93018480493 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83136746284 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484599589322 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 746.1 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9451847314 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.05 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.35 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188904996251 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638234005327 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609587826586 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113182310426 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784019111341 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...nts. For example, if Harry is running an IT company to provide service , he is the ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 40, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
... For example, if Harry is running an IT company to provide service , he is the face of ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...running an IT company to provide service , he is the face of the company which bri...
^^
Line 2, column 271, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ll directly affect his company. Consider , Harry has a client in UK and the client...
^^
Line 2, column 523, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...o reject the offer as employees/company cant work for such low budget for 50 service...
^^^^
Line 2, column 623, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...eam are in favor to have this client as its a UK based firm, Harrys company will ha...
^^^
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...bout best win-win situation. In contrast , the given statement says that a leader ...
^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
... the given statement says that a leader shouldnt be competitive but to survive and get t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this movement' or 'those movements'?
Suggestion: this movement; those movements
...her every movement and repercussions of those movement. Not an aggressive competition but the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'thinks'.
Suggestion: always thinks
...ggressive competition but the one which thinks always about the welfare of people who are tru...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this leadership' or 'these leaderships'?
Suggestion: this leadership; these leaderships
... the welfare of people who are trusting these leadership. Considering the above example, if the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...reputation & growth but also they would has lost an opportunity to beat their compe...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, as to, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2401.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 487.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93018480493 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83136746284 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484599589322 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 746.1 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9451847314 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.05 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.35 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188904996251 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638234005327 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609587826586 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113182310426 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784019111341 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.