The issue presented to us is about , men and women are not equally suited for many tasks because of their inherent physical differences. I disagree with the given statement as we know these physical inheritance is not purposely given to either men or women. Hence, it would be totally wrong to discriminate on the basis of gender and their physical differences.
It really depends what tasks we are talking about baring few which are genuinely dependent upon the physical differences like giving birth to a child ,so I can agree only one percent with the statement, otherwise this issue might be facing disagreement from all over. There are many tasks in which the women are better than men and vice versa. But there is no task that a men or women can't do because of their physical differences. For example, women are good at classical dancing and if we take men is to women ratio in a classical dance , women participation will be higher but it doesn't mean that there will be no male who will be learning or want to learn classical dance.
It's the society who has created this myth that which gender is better or good at doing what tasks, otherwise both the gender are equally suitable for doing any task they are interested in. For example, from childhood everyone says to a girl that she has to do house chores and cook and take care of the family and due to this indulged mindset, she may never think about anything else apart from it. On the other hand boys are taught to earn money, be independent and handle all the finances. In both the cases, society decided what to do, not their physical differences. Ofcourse, a men can cook better than women and a women can earn better than men.
While disagreeing with the given statement, there can be a lot of questions challenging this stand. One can say women cannot drive as good as men , or , men cannot clean and do house chores as good as women. But the fact behind these questions are they never got a chance or no one encouraged them to do so even if they wanted to do. There are perspectives that says women are not mentally or physically strong to face hardships implying they are weak because they are emotional or cry, which is just human nature and not because of physical difference , given a chance women can go into space on Mars , that's the strength of women, mentally and physically. People say men are strong mentally and physically , and restrict them from crying or expressing their feeling in any difficult situation. Even men have right to be out there and express what they want with giving a second thought what society will think.
Person, be it a men or women , to say if he/she is well suited for a task or position should really depend upon their achievements and merit and not on physical differences. As we know physical differences can be hurdle for completing the tasks (for men/women) but be it any gender if they have the will, passion and commitment to do a task they surely will complete the task with excellence. For example, Shina a lady is running a multinational company as CEO and leading it while Abhi is also running a multinational company , and both their companies are in top 5 all over the world. This implies both Shina and Abhi were not only equally suited for job but also they proved they were at their respective position. They were leading their companies because they were best at it and equally suited.
- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company quot According to a recent report from our marketing department during the past year fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than 50
- Manned space flight is costly and dangerous Moreover the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men 83
- Two years ago our consultants predicted that West Egg s landfill which is used for garbage disposal would be completely filled within five years During the past two years however town residents have been recycling twice as much aluminum and paper as they 77
- Men and women because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks 54
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disag 58
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
The issue presented to us is about , men and women are not equally suited fo...
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Line 2, column 150, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...differences like giving birth to a child ,so I can agree only one percent with the...
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Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
Suggestion: a man; men
...d vice versa. But there is no task that a men or women cant do because of their physi...
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Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...vice versa. But there is no task that a men or women cant do because of their physi...
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Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ut there is no task that a men or women cant do because of their physical difference...
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Line 2, column 539, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n is to women ratio in a classical dance , women participation will be higher but ...
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Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...men participation will be higher but it doesnt mean that there will be no male who wil...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ning or want to learn classical dance. Its the society who has created this myth t...
^^^
Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
Suggestion: a man; men
...t their physical differences. Ofcourse, a men can cook better than women and a women ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...their physical differences. Ofcourse, a men can cook better than women and a women ...
^^^
Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...e, a men can cook better than women and a women can earn better than men. While disagr...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...an say women cannot drive as good as men , or , men cannot clean and do house chor...
^^
Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y women cannot drive as good as men , or , men cannot clean and do house chores as...
^^
Line 4, column 552, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e and not because of physical difference , given a chance women can go into space ...
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Line 4, column 570, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...of physical difference , given a chance women can go into space on Mars , thats the s...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 601, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...a chance women can go into space on Mars , thats the strength of women, mentally a...
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Line 4, column 604, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...hance women can go into space on Mars , thats the strength of women, mentally and phy...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 707, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y men are strong mentally and physically , and restrict them from crying or expres...
^^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
Suggestion: a man; men
...what society will think. Person, be it a men or women , to say if he/she is well sui...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...at society will think. Person, be it a men or women , to say if he/she is well sui...
^^^
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ill think. Person, be it a men or women , to say if he/she is well suited for a t...
^^
Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... is also running a multinational company , and both their companies are in top 5 a...
^^
Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'all' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'alls'.
Suggestion: alls
..., and both their companies are in top 5 all over the world. This implies both Shina...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, really, second, so, well, while, apart from, as to, for example, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 40.0 19.5258426966 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 37.0 14.8657303371 249% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2794.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 608.0 442.535393258 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59539473684 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9656475924 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49735799706 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.416118421053 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 891.0 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4866631025 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.47826087 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4347826087 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.39130434783 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441060164159 0.243740707755 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147735570311 0.0831039109588 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145344046195 0.0758088955206 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289736908105 0.150359130593 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115985770464 0.0667264976115 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
The issue presented to us is about , men and women are not equally suited fo...
^^
Line 2, column 150, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...differences like giving birth to a child ,so I can agree only one percent with the...
^^
Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
Suggestion: a man; men
...d vice versa. But there is no task that a men or women cant do because of their physi...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...vice versa. But there is no task that a men or women cant do because of their physi...
^^^
Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ut there is no task that a men or women cant do because of their physical difference...
^^^^
Line 2, column 539, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n is to women ratio in a classical dance , women participation will be higher but ...
^^
Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...men participation will be higher but it doesnt mean that there will be no male who wil...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ning or want to learn classical dance. Its the society who has created this myth t...
^^^
Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
Suggestion: a man; men
...t their physical differences. Ofcourse, a men can cook better than women and a women ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...their physical differences. Ofcourse, a men can cook better than women and a women ...
^^^
Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...e, a men can cook better than women and a women can earn better than men. While disagr...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...an say women cannot drive as good as men , or , men cannot clean and do house chor...
^^
Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y women cannot drive as good as men , or , men cannot clean and do house chores as...
^^
Line 4, column 552, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e and not because of physical difference , given a chance women can go into space ...
^^
Line 4, column 570, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...of physical difference , given a chance women can go into space on Mars , thats the s...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 601, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...a chance women can go into space on Mars , thats the strength of women, mentally a...
^^
Line 4, column 604, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...hance women can go into space on Mars , thats the strength of women, mentally and phy...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 707, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y men are strong mentally and physically , and restrict them from crying or expres...
^^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
Suggestion: a man; men
...what society will think. Person, be it a men or women , to say if he/she is well sui...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...at society will think. Person, be it a men or women , to say if he/she is well sui...
^^^
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ill think. Person, be it a men or women , to say if he/she is well suited for a t...
^^
Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... is also running a multinational company , and both their companies are in top 5 a...
^^
Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'all' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'alls'.
Suggestion: alls
..., and both their companies are in top 5 all over the world. This implies both Shina...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, really, second, so, well, while, apart from, as to, for example, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 40.0 19.5258426966 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 37.0 14.8657303371 249% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2794.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 608.0 442.535393258 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59539473684 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9656475924 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49735799706 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.416118421053 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 891.0 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4866631025 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.47826087 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4347826087 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.39130434783 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441060164159 0.243740707755 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147735570311 0.0831039109588 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145344046195 0.0758088955206 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289736908105 0.150359130593 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115985770464 0.0667264976115 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.