The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or in any other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The topic raises the inflammatory question of whether cooperation or competition is necessary in government, industrial or other fields for the upliftment of the society as a whole. Indisputably, competition is essential upto a certain stage to filter the more desirable candidates for a concerned field, nevertheless, when it comes the doing the actual jobs, cooperation proves to be a convivial state and prevails over competition for the development of the society. Thus, I would in general agree with the statement that by instilling a feeling of cooperation will pave the way for the betterment of the society.
First and foremost, cooperation is always essential in any field one can think of. For instance, after getting a Medical degree, doctors are required to act as residential doctors, assisting other surgeons before they can get the license for performing surgery by themselves. Even when they are acting as a residency, they are in a highly competitive environment because only a few get the chance of becoming a surgeon. Inspite of the prevalent competition, doctors ought to be cooperative with one another or else it might led to some horrendous implications in surgery.
In highly byzantine jobs such as governmental organizations, the function of a good government depends solely on the level of cooperation that is prevalent among the governmental authorities. When a Professor gets a Nobel prize, it is not solely due to his efforts but the effort of the whole group that plays the role of doing extensive research and thereby securing a Novel prize. If their is no sense of cooperation among different classes of the society, there will be no leader.
Admittedly, competition is essential upto a certain extent, say upto the college level. An individual needs to prove himself or herself by passing through a series of competitive exams before getting into a high ranking job. Competition in other words is a way of filter that is essential to collect most desirable candidates of the society. However, when it comes to leadership, cooperation is the more desirable norm. Even a President cannot function properly if there is no cooperation between him and governmetal staffs.
In conclusion, due to the numerous advantages of cooperation over competition, I feel that cooperation is more essential for the development of the society. And hence it is of utmost importance to instill a sense of cooperation not competition among the younger generations of the society.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-09-14 | Arghya Sarkar | 75 | view |
- It is more important for students to understand ideas and concept than it is for them to learn the facts 66
- The right path of self-knowledge is the rejection of familiar 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or in any other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 75
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on of whether cooperation or competition is necessary in government, industrial o...
^^
Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...when it comes the doing the actual jobs, cooperation proves to be a convivial sta...
^^
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l degree, doctors are required to act as residential doctors, assisting other sur...
^^
Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun get seems to be countable; consider using: 'few gets'.
Suggestion: few gets
... competitive environment because only a few get the chance of becoming a surgeon. Inspi...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... and thereby securing a Novel prize. If their is no sense of cooperation among differ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 526, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion between him and governmetal staffs. In conclusion, due to the numerous advan...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in general, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 32.0 12.9106741573 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21091811414 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.171361499 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508684863524 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.386788926 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.529411765 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7058823529 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181560955767 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603253530528 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059992193931 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103402475533 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682246832079 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 11.8971910112 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.