The right path of self-knowledge is the rejection of familiar
The issue presents a statement that recommends that the first step to self knowledge is the rejection of the familiar, i.e in the path of acquiring self knowledge we need to expurgate the already known familiar knowledge. Self-knowledge means enlightment about own's sensation, believes and other mental states. The more you acquire knowledge about yourself the more effective you become when it comes to take certain crucial steps in life.Indisputably, it is important to some extent to relinquish the familiar knowledge, nevertheless it is not absolutely essential. I would thus, in general, disagree with the recommendation provided .
I feel that one can only gain true self knowledge by being very much aware of the familiar knowledge. For instance, a child can be very extremely maladroit in nature but when he faces the challenges of life which demands him to become more and more active, he can only do so by changing his clumsy ways. When subjected to change it demands one to have certain amount of knowledge as to why he needs to change,i.e he should have a familiar knowledge about one's self.
Admittedly, there are some opinions that intimate the advantages of rejecting familiar knowledge. For instance, Gautama Buddha popularly known as lord Buddha, the founder of Buddhism stated that one can only acquire true knowledge about one's self when he or she as omitted the previously acquired knowledge which in turn will pave the way for divine enlightment. Buddha was a prince who during the initial stages of life didn't get any exposure to the macabre of death. When he was introduced to witness the horrors of death, he began practicing self denial and went on to seek enlightenment about the cycle of life and death. It was then he taught people that seeking self knowledge demands rejection of the familiar ones. If he hadn't denied his lavish life of a prince, he wouldn't have understand the true meaning of life.
In conclusion, despite of having certain degrees of advantages of relinquishing familiar knowledge, I tend to think contrary to the recommendation provided,i.e the first step to self-knowledge is not the rejection of familiar knowledge but to well aware of the knowledge he or she is familiar about and then acquire the knowledge about own's sentation or mental states.
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or in any other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 75
- It is more important for students to understand ideas and concept than it is for them to learn the facts 66
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 66
- The right path of self-knowledge is the rejection of familiar 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Indisputably
...s to take certain crucial steps in life.Indisputably, it is important to some extent to reli...
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Message: Use simply 'essential'.
Suggestion: essential
...iliar knowledge, nevertheless it is not absolutely essential. I would thus, in general, disagree wit...
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Suggestion: .
...isagree with the recommendation provided . I feel that one can only gain true s...
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Suggestion: , i
...f knowledge as to why he needs to change,i.e he should have a familiar knowledge a...
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Suggestion: one's
... should have a familiar knowledge about ones self. Admittedly, there are some opi...
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...e who during the initial stages of life didnt get any exposure to the macabre of deat...
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Suggestion: wouldn't
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Suggestion: understood
...avish life of a prince, he wouldnt have understand the true meaning of life. In conclu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06036745407 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92844781143 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496062992126 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.5297918741 60.3974514979 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.714285714 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2142857143 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354812867686 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148690733964 0.0831039109588 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143707050224 0.0758088955206 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261448250484 0.150359130593 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869879355882 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.