the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim.
In this modern era, most of us prefer to work than to be ideal irrespective of money they posses. To complement that we are surrounded by companies and industries. However, cooperation and competition are two vital entities to achieve success in life. Most of the eminent people have explained the importance of is in numerous seminars conducted by them. I partially agree with the author that we need to prepare the younger generation to work collectively and contribute equally. But, in order to be successful we need to have friendly competition among the colleagues or else they growth of the company gets stagnant.
To begin with, we learn about of cooperation from our schooling, while doing our group project. However, must of the students don't understand the importance of it. When we grow up, then humans realize their importance in both society and corporate life. For instance, England has won the world the cup, captain of the team was asked which was is most favorite match, we anticipated he say the match, in which he scored 156 runs. But, his surprised everyone in the room, he told the match in which his team had less total to defend, the reason he presented was on that realised that everyone contributed equally on the second half some with ball and others with the field. On the most difficult situation he has equal cooperation of the team.
Secondly, cooperation also helps us to know about other companions like their strengths and weakens. In the progress of growing we could learn and help others to improve their weakness. In most of the places the success depends on the whole team performance rather than a single person. However, exceptionally you may perform in team if your team does not complete the work in time you fail. Therefore, it important to help our teams and make them grow parallelly.
Lastly, it is crucial to have a healthy competition among teammates. Since, we humans have it in our veins, we give our best when we are pressurized situations and it helps us to push our limits, not to be complacent and bask about our achievements. If there is no healthy competition there will no growth in the company. But, if the competition is no longer healthy and colleagues try to be overly competent then is not a positive sign for the company.
To sum up, it is crucial to teach children about cooperation and make them realize the beneficent of growing paralleling. However, i partially agree with author. Since, having a healthy competition is also very much important in the company. to have consistent growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: To
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, on the whole, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85844748858 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75817985986 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4523926763 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.12 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.52 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0995107283609 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246989668998 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283087221811 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0508858812462 0.150359130593 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242697125291 0.0667264976115 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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