Those who treat politics and morality as though they were separate realms fail to understand either the one or the other
In this modern era, people believe that politicians do not stand on principles, are not moral. However, this was not case in past before couple of decades, locals used to have faith and where loyal to their leaders. Public representatives believe that to continue in politics they have to comprise with their principles. Nonetheless, they forgot that people have voted him by getting impressed by principles. Sometimes politicians get blind, obsessed with the power and money that comes along with it. They forget the main reason behind getting in to politics to help poor people. I agree according to the author that politics and morality are not separate realms, to fully understand politics we need to juxtapose both.
First and foremost, People have power to elect their representatives, in this process voters try find a person who will adhere to his principles and will not comprise with his morals even at the most adverse conditions and will not be affected by the power and money that comes along with. For instance, the chief minister of Goa Mr. Goel, was elected as chief minister of 5 continuous tenures, although he was in power for long period, his net worth was low, he did not have any luxurious car. when asked about it by fellow reporters why people elected him for two decades. His answer was he never had interest in luxurious things and was elected by people to serve their needs not his.
Secondly, Most of the people believe that in this present world most the people in power are corrupt and are rife with scams. it is obvious for them to think since it has become banal that politicians do scams and are least bothered about the people who elected him. For example, B.J.P had won elections in 2014, after long period about nearly two decades, people dethroned congress since they fed up their fallacies. Hence, opted for B.J.P, however in their first two years news was out that B.J.P was involved in scam about nearly one billion dollars.
Lastly, people need to understand that both realms morality and politics are interconnected and hence choose their leader wisely. A person who is free from scams and he should be known for his shrewdness. However, in this current situation it must be very difficult to find that type of a person. To illustrate, in the recent elections Ram was a well known leader and affluent person, he was winning elections from last two tenures. However, people has chosen Roy who free from scams and adept at taking decisions.
To sum up, People should start realizing that both politics and morality are interrelated. Hence start electing persons who are free from corruption and are judicious. They should be adhere to there principles in the most adverse conditions and they should not get blind by power and money that come along with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, lastly, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2357.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 480.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91041666667 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45934918983 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48125 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6370969484 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.47826087 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8695652174 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86956521739 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119636122446 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445582139764 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510513222637 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078990427645 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446130624469 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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