The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The argument here is the best way to for the society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by installing coöperation and not competition. I agree with this most of the times. Cooperation in any field is absolutely necessary to achieve our goals. Also we cannot neglect the term competition which brings out most our capacity into time light.
Now a days the world is heading towards rapid growth. The solution to a problem in any field is getting complex and complex. In such situations coöperation between people working for a common goal becomes absolutely important. For instance, in a multinational company, people from different country work for the same project. In order to finish it quickly with high-efficiency, coöperation between the employees is necessary.They must coöperate each other in adjusting to their time zones, understand each other difficulty and to overcome those. Instead of competing with each other, coöperation between them brings a lot of value to the company.
Further, government should work for the betterment of the society. The government officials should coöperate with each other for the common interest of serving people.For example, In passing a bill in parliamentary which is beneficial to the society, the opposition parties should coöperate ruling party to go ahead instead of depromoting it. Here cooperation is necessary which is helpful for the society. The young people who are interested in politics should develop the sense of coöperation along with competition.
However we cannot neglect the term competition which tries to bring out most of the capacity from an individual. In order to survive in the modern society where the competition is everywhere, the young people should install the sense of competition also. For example, If a critical task is given to students who are working in a group and same task is given to a single student, the single student try to do greatest work compared to the group member where there will be a coöperation between them. Hence competition brings out lot of stuff from an individual.
FInally to conclude, the young people need to install the sense of coöperation in achieving the common goals. They also need to develop competitive skills in order to survive in modern society where competition lies in every field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
... the times. Cooperation in any field is absolutely necessary to achieve our goals. Also we cannot ne...
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Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...olutely necessary to achieve our goals. Also we cannot neglect the term competition ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...t most our capacity into time light. Now a days the world is heading towards rapid grow...
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Line 3, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...st our capacity into time light. Now a days the world is heading towards rapid grow...
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...tion between the employees is necessary.They must coöperate each other in adjusting ...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...r the common interest of serving people.For example, In passing a bill in parliamen...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...oöperation along with competition. However we cannot neglect the term competition ...
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Line 8, column 250, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...should install the sense of competition also. For example, If a critical task is giv...
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Line 8, column 406, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'do the greatest'.
Suggestion: do the greatest
...ngle student, the single student try to do greatest work compared to the group member where...
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Line 8, column 500, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ere will be a coöperation between them. Hence competition brings out lot of stuff fro...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: FInally,
...out lot of stuff from an individual. FInally to conclude, the young people need to i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, however, if, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22513089005 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97366067699 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471204188482 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.4941857845 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296913959245 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944691258003 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13857152806 0.0758088955206 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178094819818 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104537777892 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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