The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
The argument claims that the tbest way for a society is to prepare the young for leadership in governement, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation and not competition. Cooperation is definitely a very important factor without which there can be a total chaos in the working.
A team can be compared to a boat, where each member in the team has to row the oars of a boat in cooperation with other. If an individual in the team thinks otherwise that is rowing a boat in different direction, forget reaching the destination, the boat might not be able to make progress or might end up going in the wrong direction. Cooperation is essential factor when it comes to team work which helps a team achieve sustainable goals in a short time.
Cooperation leads to mutual respect and understanding among peers. This brings a peaceful, harmonious and helpful environment necessary for progression of mankind. For example, if countries and its respective leaders had been cooperative with each other in times of difficulty or tension, we wouldnt have encountered a World War I or World War II chapter in our history books. Due to lack of cooperation among leaders there was so much lose of life, destruction of earth in the wars that happened in the 20th and 21st centuries.
Only competiton is also bad as it could bring in selfishness in a person to be the best of all while the entire mankind might be falling. However it is also true that cooperation alone cannot benefit mankind. There should be some sense of healthy competition among the human race.This helps one to push through the boundaries of limitations and perform better than the others.
So it is very important to teach the young people to cooperate among their peers as well to compete. It is necessary to teach them to move forward and out-perform each other while making sure they give a helping hand when others fall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, well, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9009009009 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81674794537 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570570570571 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9318328938 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197565575458 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654031491845 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125714924616 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119500682784 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122372448949 0.0667264976115 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.