The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
"Today's youngsters are tomorrow's leaders". If the younger people are trained in the right way and given the right knowledge of leadership and sense of coöperation as how a leader leads a team and encourages the entire team or the society to give, then the society can always see a great difference and improvement.
It is the duty of the parents to educate their children about the societal problems and encouraging them to come up with innovative and solvable ideas to solve the issues that we faces in a day-to-day basis. For example, the environmental issues that we are facing and lack of discipline when it comes to keeping our environment clean. This discipline builds up in young people when they are trained from their childhood both by their parents and the schools they study. They have to be encouraged to teach their fellow mates about the discipline and work as a team.
When such a teamwork and discipline is taught at a very young age, they will be in a place to take up the responsibility as a leader with much coöperation than competition in any of the fields. It is always good to encourage the younger generation to explore and innovate and not comparing them to others.
On the other hand, it is always told that, "too much is too bad". It's very bad for younger people to force them to think, and not letting them think. And comparing them with others, will always get them a feeling of competition.
A good leader is one who not only leads the entire team but also walks with the team. To feed such a quality of leadership in the younger people it's the duty of the parents to show them the right path of success by letting them explore and innovate which gives them a sense of coöperation, not competition.
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'face', 'fax'
Suggestion: face; fax
...vable ideas to solve the issues that we faces in a day-to-day basis. For example, the...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... work as a team. When such a teamwork and discipline is taught at a very young...
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Line 15, column 146, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ity of leadership in the younger people its the duty of the parents to show them th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 310.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70322580645 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74026704457 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48064516129 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6923076923 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.153846154 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195741989556 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660738738063 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683162025911 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10951283638 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558162925826 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.