The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The main objective of a society is to produce youth who are versatile and talented. The youth of the society must be at the forefront of the society's development. Hence, it is of paramount importance to nurture youth into positions of leadership by instilling a sense of cooperation reinforced with competition which helps them to improve their abilities.
Cooperation is the quality of accepting and working together as a group. A leader has myriad responsibilities like making apt decisions for the welfare of the team, have a profound understanding of an idea's implications etc. One of his/her's most important responsibility is to prevent any discord in the group. The leader must ensure that all the members are cooperating with each other. The sense of cooperation in a group is quintessential to the group's success. All the members will be able to understand their roles and execute their tasks precisely only when a sense of cooperation prevails in the group.
Football is a good example where cooperation is of paramount importance for the success of the team. Football is a team sport consisting of 11 players on either sides. The players must be tactically astute and must be on the same page for the coach's tactics to bear fruit. The attackers can breakdown a defense only when they have an understanding between themselves and complement each other's abilities. Hence, cooperation is pivotal for the success of any group .
Competition has played a crucial role in the evolution of human beings. The sense of competiton enables someone to get better than their competitors resulting in the improvement of their abilities. Competition enables one to set high benchmarks and acheive them and motivates them to hound for higher benchmarks.
For example, Lionel Messi and Ronaldo are known to be the greatest footballers of all time. Their incredible desire to win and dog for myriad goals and assists has kept them at the pinnacle of footballing charts for a long time. Competiton between the two has complemented them and motivated them to work hard and break unsurmountable records. Hence, competition can be used as a tool for improvement of an individual.
Although competition is important, the competition between individuals or groups must be healthy. The individuals must stick to some ethics and morals and must not breach them while competing with each other.
Hence, the society must nurture its youth into positions of power by instilling a sense of cooperation conflated with healthy competition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 450, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
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Line 9, column 464, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, still, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21219512195 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07206690826 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1515508525 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0416666667 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.21951772744 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198949188117 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568837919222 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445372407025 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105680702828 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442236991513 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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