The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. The statement says that a society should prepare its young people for leadership by creating a sense of cooperation , not competition.
The speaker believes that the best way to prepare society's young people for leardership in government, industry or other fields is by installing in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. I concede that today's youth requires the sense of cooperation more rather than competition, however, the author made this argument too narrow by suggesting only 'cooperation' is needed. I believe that young people should have a sense of coopertaion but also requires healthy competition to thrive among the fields like government and industry, etc.
First of all, consider the leadership in government field. In politics and government, one must consider their opponents point of views on particular matter rather than dismissing it just because it's offered by opponents. As we know, in democratic government, people's well-being, health-care and security are the main concerns one must look into. Consider current on-going situation, coronavirus pandemic, the only thing our world requires is 'cooperation' among every country. In this kind of situation, if we think to compete with other country then we may get better financially but we surely lose humanity. Therefore, we must prepare our youth to have a profound sense of coorperation, so when they became the part of the government, they can pursue this world to achieve "peace" even with having nuclear power-a weapon of mass destruction.
Secondly, in business industries, I believe cooperation is required with healthy competition. For example, when Samsung has published smart phones, many company followed its air and start building smart-phones. When Apple launched its first iPhone, no doubt Samsung got an healthy competition and it market value did afffected by new lauches of smart-phones. Nevertheless, Samsung lanched another smart phone with more diffrent features to make this competition harder, and this goes on till today. However, it is an irony that Samsung provides the chips Apple used to build iPhones. Yes, that the best example of two competitors supporting each other in this Industry.
And the last, as we know we are facing ozone layer destruction and global warming, we must participate together to save our only planet with humans. To do this we all require each others cooperation, not competition. By cooperation, we can overcome the threat of globle warming, and what's the best achievement than stopping our own extinction. Thus, I believe, the author's point has important merit.
In the final analysis, in any field, our youth must understand the diffrent between competition and cooperation. And looking on today's world, we must work with each other to thrive. I believe that we will conquer the battle against this pandemic soon with the cooperation amaong all the countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ration, not competition. I concede that todays youth requires the sense of cooperation...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...ns one must look into. Consider current on-going situation, coronavirus pandemic, the on...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun company seems to be countable; consider using: 'many companies'.
Suggestion: many companies
...hen Samsung has published smart phones, many company followed its air and start building sma...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... its first iPhone, no doubt Samsung got an healthy competition and it market value...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'markets'?
Suggestion: markets
...msung got an healthy competition and it market value did afffected by new lauches of s...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... humans. To do this we all require each others cooperation, not competition. By cooper...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...rcome the threat of globle warming, and whats the best achievement than stopping our ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, kind of, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2342.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37155963303 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96582603395 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561926605505 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0096109256 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.454545455 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86363636364 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210264294852 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611202889568 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959606518373 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119750634117 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12383893153 0.0667264976115 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.