The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Education plays a vital role in transferring knowledge from learned to learner person. There are various ways to test our knowledge. Competition is one of them. Our teachers at school test our knowledge and give the feedback. Based on the feedback students need to make some improvements in theirstudies or performance. If teachers choose to give only positive feedback, students may not improve themselves. Positive feedback helps to encourage and motivate students in their studies. But that does not mean to undermine negative feedback. Everyone has positive and negative points. Hence there are various reasons to disagree author's view, the best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.
teachers and parents can guide and motivate students. They are the best one to judge as most of the time children spend time with their parents and teachers. For instance, a B grade student who got some feedback to improve in maths, he will work hard and will improve in studies. As a result of this, his maths will improve. On other hand, if teacher choose to praise on positive point and ignored negative points then there are less possibility that student may improve and progress.
Secondly, Take an example of 'Sachin Tendulkar' who is a great cricket player. If his teachers could have praised only positive points and ignored negative ones then he would not be a great player as now. Every renowned person learned from their mistakes. Parents should teach their children to learn from mistake.
Some may argue that, negative feedback may demotivate students. Teachers should teach their students to learn from negative points. Not every defeat or feedback is measured by self respect. Nobody is born with perfection, everyone makes mistakes. We should understand our mistake, improve it and make sure it should not be repeated.
In conclusion, teachers and parents are responsible to raise children. Their responsibility is to guide students and motivate. To achieve success in life, both are important positive and negative point. Praise will encourage students to do respective task efficiently while negative points will help to understand the weaken areas and students can overcome negative points with qualities like diligent, persistence and hard efforts .This will leads to perfection.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64785255239 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6602778067 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0357142857 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.25 23.4991977007 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158495166338 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473753603543 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674206613246 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927853321796 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399822831407 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.51 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.8971910112 34% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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