Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
students are the pillars of tomorrow's world. educator plays an important role in transferring knowledge to students. The role of an educational institution is to guide students rather than encouraging them for lucrative jobs. lucrative jobs depend on government policies and economic stability. students are the better individual to introspect themselves and to find out the field of study they want to pursue their career. There are several reasons to disagree author's view that educational institutes should encourage students for lucrative jobs.
educational institutions can guide the path but to follow the path students need to put efforts. students should be diligent and persistence in their studies. These qualities will help them to succeed in any field.
Take an example, if a student encouraged to study engineering without interest. He/she may find difficulties in completing the course and then finding a job. After getting a job, he/she may not enjoy their work. On the other hand, if a student encouraged to study as per their interest eg. Catering. He/she may enjoy the study and secure good marks in studies. He/she may enthusiastic about his work. this may be called as a success in his career.
In addition to this, if teachers encourage students to lucrative jobs, students may experience unemployment due to the less demand. Also, the nation requires their youth to be successful in all fields like agriculture, engineering, medical. Every field is important and lucrative jobs are not stable.
Some may argue that educational institutions are the best to encourage the students for high paying jobs. It is true that educators prepare us by enlightening knowledge. educators should encourage students to an aptitude test and based on the result, they should encourage to choose the fields of study.
To conclude, educators should encourage the students to follow as per their interest and to be successful in career persistence and diligent is important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, thus, in addition, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 314.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35668789809 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90909926503 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512738853503 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5515441197 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.1304347826 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.652173913 23.4991977007 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.39130434783 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280847790328 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886307395398 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658365003962 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164891805003 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639122543598 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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