Everyone is not perfect.they are different and posses some unique skills and characteristics. Fewer skills often lead to mistakes and it should be rectified. People always learn from mistakes.No one loves and do not deliberately do it. This negative thing is useful in learning new things. People admire their good work, they do not want to criticize for mistakes which negatively influence their auspicious carrier. Although some people believe that great way to teach someone is to consider only good works and praise them, it is unshakably true that good way of teaching is to take positive as well as negative works.
As mentioned earlier,everyone is not perfect.always there is two side of anyone's life;positive and negative.from positive side people get praise and appreciation while from negative side they receive criticizing and punishments.criticizing and punishment prevent people from doing negative and bad activities.Once it is censured it is not repeated.Ignorance of such activities provoke them to do more execrable things.While positive side gain someone applaud,negative side or mistakes are very useful in learning or teaching a lesson.Employee should be awarded promotions and increments when performance of the employee is great.but at the same time showing digress and anger is also equally important when certain deadline is not met.
Admiration can only encourage people to do good things but it does not assure about their negative activities.People may or may not do it but main point is they should be punished-mentally or physically-for their execrable work.Teacher should punish students who do not have done it;this enforce great impact on students and homework will be done before next lecture.wrong peculiar future path should be disapprove by parents and it is limpid that punishing is not amiable for parents but still for teaching purpose this should be done.This is one typical exemplar of teaching with negative mistakes.
There should always balance between them.truth is that praise and excoriation should be balanced.for small mistakes someone should not suffer from so much of metal torture through castigating and libeling.Admiration is also should be at par with admonishment.work and admiration as well as libel should be in proportional. means that for tiny work admiration is also low.
Best way to teach someone is to find and rectify errors rather ignore it.One should unbiased-no predilections-in teaching by negative things.
Mistakes are inevitable;they may be not avoided but should be recognized and rectified.Teaching someone from praising is much more easier than chastening.because of some dogmatic people.From above given claims one can clearly and unambiguously state that teaching should consider both the things-positive and negative- rather only positive actions which praise them.amicable things should be awarded whereas negative things should be castigated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2493.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62753950339 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52655327775 2.79657885939 126% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512415349887 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 781.2 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 223.387493433 60.3974514979 370% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.75 118.986275619 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.9166666667 23.4991977007 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114275978396 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484388011048 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456878274611 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764562766252 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352992739181 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 14.1392134831 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.02 48.8420337079 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 12.1639044944 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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