Claim: When planning courses, educators should take into account the interests and suggestions of their students.Reason: Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying.Write a response in which you discuss the exte

Designing curricula is always been a tedious task. Due to complexity and obscurity of designing it, designers are under great pressure to incorporate interesting subjects of all the students.This arcane curriculum is difficult to teach.Although some people believe that student's suggestions should not be taken seriously while teaching,one should consider the interest and suggestions of the students because it is a burgeon factor for student to take interest in studying.It is unequivocally agreeable thought that one should consider suggestions of students while teaching such courses.

Courses are already planned on what educators believe best for the students,though it may have years that designer has found themselves in student's seat.one cannot determine effectiveness without experiencing it.By taking suggestions of students the flexibility of teaching can be increased and educators can easily identify what area of subjects are interesting.fascinating things can be easily understood and may vitalize students to explore other related pedestrian topics.it reduce the work of professors as students now taking interest in topics which one time seems dull.For instance,Educators use projectors for better understanding of topic and invoking interest among students.Students can also suggest that professor should provide some live demo to understand things pragmatically.and educators can seriously do it and increase the interest.

suggestions by students make them active.Active participation in learning is the most crucial part.Active participation means engaging with topic. enthusiastically implementing students suggestion makes a student feel worthy.pupils always venerate educators for considering their suggestion.Students always take interest in learning if they respect educators.So this is helpful in increasing the performance of the students.

With all said,Educators do not need to consider all suggestions.It is not necessary for him to implement all of it.here is great diversity in interest of people and hence educators should implement Some ideas which have merit need to be implemented and some jargon or less important not need to be implemented.Students have motivated in the way educator teach because of interest.Those who can generate interest they need not to implement much of the suggestions but with poor teaching skills consideration and implementation is necessary.Ones students are motivated to learn there is no need of such things.

It is unshakably agreeable after forward presented arguments that When planning course educators should consider some of the suggestions because of diversity in interest and suggestions.They may not totally consider all of the thoughts but for creating interest in subjects they should sometimes consider the suggestions and implement them.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, thus, while, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2430.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 405.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 5.05705443957 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64850722053 2.79657885939 130% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 23.0359550562 247% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 259.68874619 60.3974514979 430% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 347.142857143 118.986275619 292% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.8571428571 23.4991977007 246% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321441183998 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151842921342 0.0831039109588 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834606852593 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194198587772 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299954976246 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.8 14.1392134831 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.3 48.8420337079 -7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 12.1743820225 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.41 12.1639044944 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.91 8.38706741573 130% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.8 11.2143820225 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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