Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
We live in a era of comic books where almost every children grows up with the fantasy of being a hero or role model. For some people it can be a character from a fiction, and for some it can be a person from . If we closely observe,we can see that a person is highly influenced by these role models and their morality and actions. Thus by observing the characraters of such heroes and role models one can get a pretty good idea about the standard social values of a community.
During world war two the german people idolized Hitler and his call of supremacy over other race and nations. This ideology was almost accepted by the all of the german people. That was the concurrent situation of that society which is in line with the vison of Hitler. Also if we observe the incident of liberation war in bangladesh , we can see that people was very influenced by the leadership of the Sheik Mujibur Rahman, who was later also declared as the Bengali Person of the century. The ideal he maintained is reflected in the people of the country which resulted in the separation from the Pakistan as a answer to the opression. This leaders and role models are considered as the represtation of the moral value society value.
Also, in the United States during the second world War, many characters played as an influential role. From movie stars to famous player all tried to contributed in their own way by using their fame and sway their follower to the cause. Even in the current era the public influence of such figures are enormous. Because, A misdeed by them can result in a copycat from the follower base.
Although the influence of such role models in the shaping of a society is very pivotal, there are some exceptions to it. Sometimes, specially in a democratic state, one might won the system technically, but might not have the popular opinion. The recent Us election is a very good example of that. As the polls shows, most of the american does not agree on most of the policies and standard maintained by Donald Trump. So, if we actually characterize the who american people on the scale of trumpiness, It will give a false impression of american standard and values.
Everyone has their heroes, their role model, someone to follow while growing up. These role models in turn help to shape the persona and greatly influence the behavior. Although by observing the life and characteristics of the heroes, it is not always the most comprehensive representation of the society. But if we can take them removing the bias, we can get a pretty standard picture of standard and value of the society.
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- TOEFL T P O 12 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim a 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, second, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67608695652 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60603993175 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8062419711 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.5217391304 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08695652174 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160146255554 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469732988411 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633373714653 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834680562934 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277302059585 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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