The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Can the character of a society only be examined by its major models? The statement above suggests it is the best way to represent, but I can not fully agree with this viewpoint. In the field of economy and politics, role models can not on behalf of the feature of the society, but in the realm of culture it can show the willingness of all.
To begin with, this assumption may be not suitable in some situations in the politic field. The role models in politics could be successful leaders who have made great contributions to the progress of the whole society. But as a matter of fact, an excellent leader can sometimes put forward visionary policy, while many citizens may not understand the necessity and the benefits. For instance, Lincoln implemented the abolition of slavery. Although it is thought to be a noble policy in the current era, many people at that time objected to this policy and refused to obey it due to the religious beliefs and individual interests. From this example, it is evident that sometimes the willingness and thoughts could not represent the whole character of the society and major ideas.
Furthermore, in the field of economy, role models can not represent the financial situations and characters of a society. A role model in the business field can be someone who creates a novel business pattern or has run his own business successfully, who is also playing a significant role in stimulating the economy. However, the success of a businessman should not be determined by just these aspects. Various factors should be taken into consideration, such as the social effects and the environmental effects. For example, Jake Ma is a successful business leader who created the online shopping mall TaoBao and Tmall. The stores are very famous in China for the time-saving convenience they bring. But when we think of the environmental effects it brings, the pattern might not be that well. We are supporting to environmental-friendly shopping, but this kind of shopping pattern which produces too much waste of recourses are not corresponding to our willingness. The only role models can just not convey the main ideas.
However, it is true that models can convey the cultural and spiritual pursuit of the whole society. The core spirit of the society is mainly conveyed by the cultural and moral models effectively. They are chosen to be the role model more or less because there are virtues and qualities that attract people. For instance, Mother Teresa is a world-wide model for her kindness to help the old and the sick. She gives a lot of donations to the people in need. This behavior is widely praised and popular in our society. It is and will forever be the high moral pursuit of human.
To summarize, by examining the role models, we can draw the characters of a society in some aspects, such as moral. But it is not always the best way, and for some fields it fails to represent the whole feature.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, it is true, more or less, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2446.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 506.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83399209486 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82543456911 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 776.7 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0878664565 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5925925926 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7407407407 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07407407407 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164608810013 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047407282298 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625078534501 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111350082441 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553760919712 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, it is true, more or less, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2446.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 506.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83399209486 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82543456911 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 776.7 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0878664565 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5925925926 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7407407407 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07407407407 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164608810013 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047407282298 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625078534501 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111350082441 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553760919712 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.