“There are some people who live in a dream world, and there are some who face reality; and then there are those who turn one into the other.” This quote naturally manifests the reality of life. To dream, to imagine is the main root for being creative and innovative in one's way of thinking. closing your own mind and just following what the world wants from you will make the world happy, not you. therefore, you should be wise enough to take your own decisions and be the ruler of your own life.
firstly, there are some people who are not clear with their dreams and interest. they do not know what they really want to achieve in their lives. for them, it is fine to do what is right for them by taking advice from others whom they trust.however, most of the young people, at least for once in their lives dream to be like someone. but after coming across to today's oppressive competition, they feel to go with what is right according to their society and have a settled life in future. to think out of box is a talent, but to fight for what you really think and want to do needs an immutable persistence and motivation, which should be given by the society in which they are living. for example, Thomas Edison was never applauded by his school teachers for his studies and they could only see those things in him which clearly visible to them. but, on the contrary, it was Thomas Edison's mother who portrayed a true confidence in him and had always motivated him to think out of the box.
Secondly, this young generation is full of achieving new milestones and innovating new ideas. This is the generation of entrepreneurship. This world is itself the example to dream and achieve those dreams and help others in a way to achieve their dreams as well. For example, google, apple, amazon all these big tycoon companies work for the betterment of the world and by doing that they themselves are achieving big names and prosperity. As Albert Einstein said that imagination is more important than knowledge. Imagination should not be spuriously thought as procrastination. Thinking big is not selfish, at the end of the day what matter is a revolutionary change that a person brings by thinking big. Being collective always ends up to be greater than being just settled and working four your own self . It is wrong to say that one can dream only for his own enlightenment. For example, Bill Gates worked for his dream and his dream brought a collective ascendancy to the whole world. Today he is working as a philanthropist and using his success as a ladder to go deep in people's heart by working for their betterment. He is given a formidable homage only because of being the man of his dreams and inspiring others to conquer their dreams as well. This could be called anything but selfish.
Admittedly, there are some youngsters who are never able to decide what they really want to have in their lives. they just live in their dream world of being the best and the result of which is that they end in a cubicle sell doing a mediocre job. also, for most of the lower middle class family students, the most important thing is just that they want to get a job and could help their family's financial condition to re surge.
In conclusion, it should not be a generalized thinking that what a person dreams about is always selfish. and even if it is selfish, and the end of the day it is his career and his life. he should be motivated to do what he really want to do and then he is going to fight every obstacles that will come in his path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, at least, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 45.0 19.5258426966 230% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 33.0505617978 227% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2914.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 645.0 442.535393258 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51782945736 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.03952876749 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51046559057 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 215.323595506 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432558139535 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 887.4 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4629344001 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156355829895 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460524171892 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371928191264 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957146236536 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482468625307 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.