Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals.
Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim AND the reason on which that claim is based
Dreams and Goals are two differently meaning words but for some people their goal is their dream or vice-versa. The author claims that often young people are being advised to "follow your dreams" but picking up worthy career goals should be given more emphasis, the reason being many people's dream are inherently selfish. I do not agree to the author's claim nevertheless, there are some people for whom picking up worthy goals is necessary. My stance with cogent reasoning and suitable examples is discussed further.
Dreams and passion go hand in hand. Many youngsters do things they dream to achieve by more hard work and passionately than for things chosen on basis of worthy goals. They will be more effective, productive and creative when working for their dream or passion. They will want to achieve their dream not for selfish reasons but because they love doing it. The reason given by author for the claim that young people should set up a worthy goal instead of following dreams because people's dream are selfish doesn't make me believe that.
It may be the case that people are likely to receive huge salaries, fame and recognition by working hard to achieve their dreams, but that doesn't typically mean they wanted to achieve it because they have some selfish motives behind it. For instance, Sir Isaac Newton and Thomas Edison accidentally invented theory of gravitational force and light respectively. Their passion of discovering reasons behind everything made them a great scientist and not because they had some selfish motives behind it.
However, there are some young people who don't have any passion or couldn't find any interest at an early age. For them, I believe choosing a worthy goal would make more sense like author said but the reasoning is still something that I don't agree as even to achieve a goal you set is a hardworking task and along with that, one will have to develop interest as well to pursue their goal in a better and fruitful way. In addition, Young people are very whimsical when making decisions about their goals. They tend to follow the career path where most of the other people are likely to go and not because they are interested in that.
In conclusion, following dreams for the passion and interest you have discovered and developed should be more recommendable for youngsters than just setting up a worthy goal. Because no matter what it is a dream or a goal, it cannot be achieved if one has selfish reasons behind it as to achieve anything hard work, determination and interest are must.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90114942529 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48761338889 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473563218391 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4325976486 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.444444444 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281085572688 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101230435647 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111153074238 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17303145928 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103799458857 0.0667264976115 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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