Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
The statement argues that the government should provide financial support to their major cities so that they can preserve the culture and the tradition of their country. Many of us argues that this will hold all the time, while others will counter this. In my essay, I will highlight why government should not provide financial support to the major cities and will provide sound reasoning for the same.
First, major cities are the backbones of countries economy and provide employment to people from different state, language, culture and tradition, which makes them cosmopolitan in nature, however their customs and traditions are different from the rest of the country, for example, in the Mumbai, known as the financial capital of India, whose tradition is different from the most of the cities of India like their social resembles with the other major cities of the world such as London, New York and there is similar pattern follows in the most of region of south east Asia. So, if the government provide the financial support to major cities so that they can preserve tradition and culture, won't fulfill the purpose.
Secondly, if look at the countries of the south east Asia, where major part of world population is living either on poverty line or below the poverty, and if their government start spending or providing support to the major cities, then it create the major issues in their respective countries because this will leads to more poverty, more crime rate and to various other problem. This argument might be feasible to the developed countries, as they don't have any such problem.
Third, cultural and traditions are most followed in the village areas and they are limited to village because cities more vulnerable in battles than villages. The complex politic turmoil, often happened in huge cities, also has negative influences on the culture protection. In small villages, the calm and steady life style are better for culture protection. Some old architectures remain only damaged structure, due to the war. For instance, the temple in Athens, and the old summer palace in Beijing. However, in small villages, some old structures can avoid the war damage.
In nutshell, we can say that providing financial support to the major cities won't be a good idea because traditions and cultural are now limited to the village and instead of this the government should focus on the other issue in the country and should try to counter them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, third, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07334963325 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46540375942 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491442542787 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.926894178 60.3974514979 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.214285714 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2142857143 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 5.21951772744 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314005984491 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110269264962 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116906914869 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181629219047 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813006448911 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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