Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
When we hear the name of a certain country, we often envisage the scenary of that country based on the characteristical monuments of its major cities. In this regard, it is arguable that a nation’s cultural assets are mostly generated and preserved in its major cities, and consequently that governments should financially support their major cities to make them thrive. Although I agree with the claim that governments must provide a financial support to its major cities to preserve their culture, I disagree with the statement that the cultural ambience of a nation is entirely determined in its major cities.
Granted, preserving and thriving cultural monuments in major cities are crucial to the nation’s reputation. As mentioned above, when we hear the name of a nation, we do not imagine the scenary of its rural area but its major cities. For example, the effiel tower and the park nearby it constitute the representative image of France, and Big Ben and the Westernminster Abbey are the image we mentally visualize when we hear of England. As revealed in these somewhat blatant examples, certainly there are important cultural monuments and concomitant ambience that heavily influences on the people’s perception of their nation.
In addition, considering the increasing importance of cultural prowess, it is apparent that the reputation and people’s preconception of a nation are becoming more important also in economic perspective. The K-dramas of south korea epitomizes this point of view. Before K-culture’s gaining its global popularity, South Korea was not an attractive option for tourists. However, the characteristic artefacts that appear in K-dramas enticed K-drama aficionados, leading them to visit Korea. Consequently, South Korea earned a substantial profit through tourism. Therefore, even in terms of economy, preserving and thriving the culture of major cities are important.
However, it should be noted that a nation’s cultural traditions are not entirely preserved and generated in cities. For example, in case of dealing with the tea culture of China, the culture that gained a global popularity nowadays, tea culture was originated in its rural area. The reason is evident, since there were no comestible leaves nearby its major cities due to the inexorable construction of palaces and other monuments. Therefore, tea culture was initiated and fostered entirely in the rural areas of China; the Boi-tea, which is one of the China’s characteristic tea, was originated from the place located on the border of China. In addition to this parochial example, there are also other compelling examples, such as Sushi of Japan and Bulgogi of Korea, where a nation’s characteristic culture was actually originated from and developed by its rural area.
In brief, although preserving and thriving cultural monumens in major cities are important in that it heavily affects the people’s perception of their nations, it is not that nations’ cultural tranditions are virtually solely engendered and fostered by their major cities. Therefore, instead of entirely disbursing their budget to their major cities, governments should also take their rural area into consideration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 286, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'constitutes'?
Suggestion: constitutes
...the effiel tower and the park nearby it constitute the representative image of France, and...
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Line 4, column 681, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
... In addition to this parochial example, there are also other compelling examples, such as Sushi of J...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, however, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in brief, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2719.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 497.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4708249497 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01879804333 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454728370221 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 873.0 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4947860924 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.95 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.85 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280379682963 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100722569605 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102702709012 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174402368503 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773419426086 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 48.8420337079 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 100.480337079 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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