The issue presented while interesting fails to create a strong bond between its reasoning and conclusion. The writer claims that imagination is more valuable asset than experience and people who have imagination are free to imagine what is possible without constraints of established habits and attitudes. While i agree that imagination is a more important mental tool than experience,both can't do without the other.
In precious centuries examples are in replete of various scientific discoveries that where invented due to creative imagination of certain elite individuals such as one Thomas Edison among others. Creative thinking brings something new to the table and one does not need much of knowledge to be creative. Thomas Edison, an american scientist spent only few months in school and still has a patent for lots of discoveries such as electric light among others that have lead to the betterment of life standard.
On the other hand, this is not to say that imagination can survive independently in all cases as they are both tantamount in importance with each other in some cases. In a personal experience, as an electrical engineering student, during my final year project in college i was finding it abstruse to implement my design into what i wanted to develop and had to get help from my Professor and with his aphorism i was able to implement my imagination into something handy. This is to say Experience and Imagination have to work hand in hand in some cases for real and quick success to be achieved.
In a world of such superfluous number of creative musicians we discover that most musicians that produce great music start doing so at a very tender age. Musicians such as Justin Beiber, Ed sheeran, Mozart etc, started producing really nice tunes that show how creative thinkers they are. however this is not to say that old people are not creative in there music as we have pop starts like Madonna still producing quality music at a much older age.
It is not true that established habits and attitude would affect imaginative thinkers, as long as they are passionate. Steve Jobs was driven by his enthusiasm for computers and ended up building one of the greatest mobile devices available to man at the moment in Apple. Examples are in Replete when passion has made imagination more profitable. Most present developments in machines and other fields still had to tap into previous older developments that where brought about by imagination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, still, thus, while, such as, in all cases, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02184466019 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81069533171 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570388349515 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4934147656 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.3125 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269803993907 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912405165966 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168254515284 0.0758088955206 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152803986676 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183721051268 0.0667264976115 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.