55. In order for any work of art-for example, a film, a novel, a poem, a song-to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
I partially agree with the speaker's assertion that a merit of any work of art depends on understandable of the most people. However, there are many other aspects that contribute for any art to be succesful. In other words, content is crucial factor that play a dominant role in art.
For instance, an art like movies, a novel--receives merit when they are easily comprehended by the people. Otherwise, it is neglected. No matter how great it is , unless it is understandable, audience don't recognise its value. Suppose, a native american can't read a korean novel. without background knowledge, one can't judge a art.
In some cases, art like music, even tough when people cannot understand their meaning like "ganganm style"--"Despacito", they really enjoy its beats and music, which have got an immense popularity irrespective of their language. people sing and dance to songs even if they don't understand them.Many famous singers are lauded even when people don't understand their song's lyrics.So,in such cases art gets merit even if it is not understandable by most.
Hereby ,i conclude that it cannot be generalized that arts gets merit only if it is pursued by most of the people because, at the end of the day it is a question about the individual's ability to comprehend and enjoy it.few forms of arts like music and dance can be loved across the world without being understood by people .While, literary art forms need to be understood by people so that they can enjoy them and appreciate it.
- Claim= Imagination is a more valuable knowledge than experienceReason= people who lack experience are free to imagine without constraints of established habits and attitudes. 75
- A Nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 33
- The following is a memorandum from the business manger of a television station." Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the 33
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 33
- 55 In order for any work of art for example a film a novel a poem a song to have merit it must be understandable to most people 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, while, for instance, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 253.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06719367589 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39562079162 2.79657885939 121% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577075098814 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 113.696929314 60.3974514979 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.545454545 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280871943651 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104154056102 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914618332726 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173700395096 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734257752197 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.