A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
I strongly believe in right to Equality, in this case right to education. Every child must be provided with the same quality of education, irrespective to their place and background.
Firstly, having students being edifying the same curriculum keep up the students with in same levels. All the public and Private schools must have the competent faculty to teach them. Having same syllabus, but being taught by inefficient faculty worsen the situation.
Secondly, having good infrastructure with a global reach are predominant for the development of student. Extra-circular must be encouraged and students are to be trained with different skills, apart from studies from very small age.
Further, apart from same curriculum there can be open-electives to choose and groom children with in their interest with a proper guidance by the teachers.
Government must also provide financial support to the students with weak financial background. How come an indigent family can join his children in a extortion school with a national curriculum with such huge prices? Even the curriculum is same it becomes impossible for a child to avail the same education, Without the financial support.
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- 55 In order for any work of art for example a film a novel a poem a song to have merit it must be understandable to most people 50
- The following is a memorandum from the business manger of a television station." Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the 33
- Claim= Imagination is a more valuable knowledge than experienceReason= people who lack experience are free to imagine without constraints of established habits and attitudes. 75
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 149, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ndigent family can join his children in a extortion school with a national curric...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.3162921348 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 2235.4752809 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 442.535393258 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46774193548 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.55969084622 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9068525734 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 704.065955056 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7868310526 60.3974514979 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.4545454545 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162044256725 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657216245251 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400622500556 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898287835257 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338848892365 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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