Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
The author here claims, it is no longer possible for a society to regard a person as a hero. I mostly disagree with this claim for the following reasons which I will elucidate below. Nevertheless, I do concede that in some cases the media scrutiny would affect the reputation of the person.
First of all, I want to define ‘who is a hero?’ the answer to this question is ‘a person whose courage and achievements are admired by people is known as a hero
A 'hero' maybe different for different people. Like in my case, my father's courage to by a new house and his achievement to become the principal of a well-known institution brings up him to become my hero, a person who i really admire. Similarly different people may regard different people as their heroes. Hence it is still possible for a society to regard an individual as a hero.
Just like a coin has two sides, the above prompt has a negative consequence as well. For example, a politician, he might be a hero for major part of the society, but when the media scrutinize him and all the wrongdoings and corruption done by him, his reputation will of course get hampered and eventually his career would diminish.
However, not all heroes are have done wrongdoings, intact most of them are true and even if they face media scrutiny eventually, they are going to come out of it as truthful. Because the truth always wins.
In conclusion, it is possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero and not all media scrutiny would lead to diminish the reputation of a person. Until and unless the person is true and genuine no one can hamper the reputation of thy.
- Claim In any field business politics education government those in power should step down after five years Reason The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership 50
- In most professions and academic fields imagination is more important than knowledge 50
- Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed 50
- The following appeared in a memorandum written by the vice president of Health Naturally a small but expanding chain of stores selling health food and other health related products Our previous experience has been that our stores are most profitable in ar 55
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... all, I want to define ‘who is a hero?’ the answer to this question is ‘a person wh...
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Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'a hero'.
Suggestion: a hero
...ments are admired by people is known as a hero A hero maybe different for different people. L...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
... my hero, a person who i really admire. Similarly different people may regard different p...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...gard different people as their heroes. Hence it is still possible for a society to r...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...diminish. However, not all heroes are have done wrongdoings, intact most of them a...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re going to come out of it as truthful. Because the truth always wins. In conclusion, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, similarly, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, of course, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 297.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54208754209 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65416841222 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542087542088 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4021126937 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.769230769 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 5.21951772744 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401274641562 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133211596919 0.0831039109588 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129107258341 0.0758088955206 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189891620382 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118813458621 0.0667264976115 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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