Claim: Researchers should not limit their investigations to only those areas in which they expect to discover something that has an immediate, practical application.
Reason: It is impossible to predict the outcome of a line of research with any certainty.
The growth of mankind has skyrocketed in merely past couple of centuries. It was only about 300 years ago when Benjamin Franklin discovered electricity and today we are building reusable rockets for space travel. This huge leap of incredible growth and advancement has been possible mostly because of rigorous research in various domains. The prompt claims that scientists should expand their research areas beyond investigating something that has immediate practical application. I wholeheartedly support this notion and I would like to strengthen my views by providing two examples as follows.
Firstly, the very core definition and essence of research means that one is looking for something that one may or may not find. In fact, 75% of the research ever done in any field has never yielded anything substantial and thus lies a good possibility that the researcher might not find what they are looking for. Take the example of researches going on in the field of genetic research. There are numerous Genetic researches in hundreds of facilities all around the globe which are attempting to modify the core human DNA and make human beings impervious to diseases, enhance their physical limitation and even avoid mortality. The investigations have been going on since decades, yet, there is still not a single tangible outcome out of these researches. Millions and millions of dollars have been spent, yet the researchers still don't have anything to show for it. These kinds of researches, though directed towards a specific practical application, might end up being a futile attempt in the long run and the whole effort will be in vain if the researchers limit their focus on only the intended research outcome. But at the same time, many important advancements and discoveries have been made which are not the expected outcomes of such researches and rather, the by-product.
Furthermore, there are countless discoveries in the past which changed the course of human advancement and ended-up being a huge milestone in human history. In particular, I am referring to those discoveries which are made by 'accident'. Yes, there are many instances where the researchers were looking for something else but wound-up discovering something which was either completely unrelated or even opposite to their intended outcome. One such important discovery is Penicillin. It is well-known that Penicillin was discovered by a veteran doctor by accident and ever since, this medication has saved countless lives against a number of lethal infections. Had the said doctor been stringent to this expected outcome, he might have thrown away this miraculous drug. Clearly, even though one do not get the intended results of a specific research, keeping their investigation areas open could definitely lead to discoveries of something else which might be a boon in other aspects.
Sure, some might argue that it does not make sense for a researcher to investige something that does not even have a practical application. But again, in research, you never know what could lead to what? A scientist looking for something found something that has no practical application and another research initiative found something that changed the course of human history. Both scenarios are equally plausible. And for this reason, along with the examples stated above, I firmly believe that research should not be limited to only those areas where we can see an immediate practical application and rather, shall be open to all kinds of possibilities. Be that as it may, even after coming so far, human race has barely scratched the surface of all the possibilites this universe lies within it.
- Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances times and places 58
- Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances times and places 83
- Claim Researchers should not limit their investigations to only those areas in which they expect to discover something that has an immediate practical application Reason It is impossible to predict the outcome of a line of research with any certainty 70
- The well being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority 83
- The well being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 834, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e been spent, yet the researchers still dont have anything to show for it. These kin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, so, still, then, thus, well, in fact, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3082.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 590.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22372881356 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92848004997 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83548734948 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 303.0 215.323595506 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513559322034 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 962.1 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2080536936 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.538461538 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353847240794 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886048104655 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083004232742 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212554108275 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432954732153 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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