Education is the backbone of a nation. But, what is education? What should I learn to be a educated person? The prompt here recommends that Universities should provide variety of courses to it’s student outside the major field. The prompt also mentioned the reason behind it that learning various disciplines is the best way to become truly educated. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the claim mentioned in the prompt and argue that a university should offer variety of courses for every field, some of which may not related to this field, for the reason mentioned in the prompt.
To begin, one, to be a truly educated person, should learn some outside courses like ethical education outside his major field. If a person become a doctor and he doesn’t learn about moral value in his college or university he wouldn’t make a proper statement to his patients. He may overcharge his patients due to the lack of his moral values. These is only the one bad side of not learning outside courses.
Further, If a person become a good engineer and one day he perpetrate car accident, and if there is no hospital near the accident spot ,you must need some first aid by yourself otherwise, even, you may die. His engineering knowledge may not be enough to keep him alive.
To wrap up, considering different viewpoints and aiming for practical solution is the key when dealing with these type of complex issues. Of course, one may argue that, if I want to be an electrical engineer, isn’t it a waste of time and effort to study some courses related to other fields like human psyocology? I would say that, perhaps, you will find a job to a well known company which run through high voltage competition with other companies. If you don’t know the basic of human physocology how will you design a product which people will like? So, we should, obviously, learn some courses outside our major to become truly educated person and also for making a noticeable statement in the job field.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...is education? What should I learn to be a educated person? The prompt here recomm...
^
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'to its student'?
Suggestion: to its student
...ities should provide variety of courses to it’s student outside the major field. The prompt als...
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Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[4]
Message: Did you mean 'this'?
Suggestion: This
...ts due to the lack of his moral values. These is only the one bad side of not learnin...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'perpetrates'.
Suggestion: perpetrates
...n become a good engineer and one day he perpetrate car accident, and if there is no hospit...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re is no hospital near the accident spot ,you must need some first aid by yourself...
^^
Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...up, considering different viewpoints and aiming for practical solution is the key...
^^
Line 4, column 710, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... noticeable statement in the job field.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75144508671 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54125636157 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537572254335 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0597472958 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7058823529 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292126917639 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945061130619 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101956963905 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16393253568 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133227499149 0.0667264976115 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...is education? What should I learn to be a educated person? The prompt here recomm...
^
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'to its student'?
Suggestion: to its student
...ities should provide variety of courses to it’s student outside the major field. The prompt als...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[4]
Message: Did you mean 'this'?
Suggestion: This
...ts due to the lack of his moral values. These is only the one bad side of not learnin...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'perpetrates'.
Suggestion: perpetrates
...n become a good engineer and one day he perpetrate car accident, and if there is no hospit...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re is no hospital near the accident spot ,you must need some first aid by yourself...
^^
Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...up, considering different viewpoints and aiming for practical solution is the key...
^^
Line 4, column 710, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... noticeable statement in the job field.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75144508671 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54125636157 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537572254335 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0597472958 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7058823529 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292126917639 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945061130619 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101956963905 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16393253568 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133227499149 0.0667264976115 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.