Claim: While boredom is often expressed with a sense of self-satisfaction, it should really be a source of embarrassment.
Reason: Boredom arises from a lack of imagination and self-motivation.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
We can say that there are primarily two kinds of people when we talk about boredome. There is one kind of people who always keep them busy with one thing or the other and on the opposite end of the spectrum, there is another kind of people who always complain that they are getting bored to death. The prompt suggests that boredom should be source of embarassment for it is engendered due to lack of imagination and self-motivation. I agree with the prompt and feel that it is when one runs out of motivation and ideas do they feel bored for the following reasons.
Firstly, one can be sure that when someone says that he/she is bored, what they actually meant is they do not have anything in their mind to do. This can be due to various reasons like - they are unable to come up with something that interests them or the very innate nature of those people is that they lack imagenation. This causes them to be querulous about boredom to other which in fact is their fault. On the other hand, if a person is imaginative, he/she is sure to come up with ideas and keep themselves busy working on them. In this context, it is pertinent to talk about the me and my brother. We studied in a boarding school all through the shcool. We used to come home during holidays and be busy for the first few days meeting relatives and acquaintances. As days follow by, my brother starts complaining to my parents that he was getting bored and he had nothing to do at home. My parents could not do anything but to be empathetic to my brother. On the other hand, though I start to feel bored, I quickly try to keep myself busy by relentlessly thinking about what I can do with the available time and the resources around me. This clearly shows that lacking imagination is definitely one of the causes of boredom.
Secondly, another cause of boredom can be due to lack of self-motivation. If we consider the above scenario where my brother used to complain about boredom while I kept myself busy with something or the other, one can uderstand that my brother was unable to come up with any ideas because he did not try hard enough to put his brain to work so that he can come up with something. It can be frustrating when any idea does not strike our brains. And, I was able to come up with something and my brother could not because not that it was easier for me for what so ever reason to come up with an idea than it was for my brother. I was able to come up with an idea because I endured the vex of not coming up wiht an idea and showed perseverance till I got an idea. And to persvere in such situations. Thus, one should have self-motivation as it is the sole reason for anyone to do anything when they have the right atitude.
However, one can claim that it is not possible for someone to be always engaged in something and sometimes, boredom is necessary so that it gives us a break from a hectic routine. I agree to their point and boredom is good only to an extent where people give rest to their mind for sometime rather than being complacent.
Therefore, boredom should be a source of embarassment as it is caused due to lack of imagination and self-motivation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sourced'?
Suggestion: sourced
... prompt suggests that boredom should be source of embarassment for it is engendered du...
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Line 4, column 582, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'me'?
Suggestion: the; me
... context, it is pertinent to talk about the me and my brother. We studied in a boardin...
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Line 4, column 1118, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding resources'?
Suggestion: the surrounding resources
...at I can do with the available time and the resources around me. This clearly shows that lacking imagin...
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Line 7, column 679, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... come up with an idea because I endured the vex of not coming up wiht an idea and showe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as for, in fact, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 86.0 33.0505617978 260% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 91.0 58.6224719101 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2585.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 589.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38879456706 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92639038232 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55288279631 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.405772495756 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 832.5 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7403290604 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.56 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.32 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179149882819 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654872665105 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749297504429 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143175160208 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662557752499 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 12.1639044944 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.