College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
This topic raises a controversial issue of whether society should prepare young people by encouraging them to better co-operate with each other or by letting them to lead a competetion. Indisputably, people should have some strong morals and ethics which encourage them to help each other to survive and grow together. Nevertheless, there is no significant proof that supports the idea that by co-operating with each other, one can succeed in his future for leading the government or industry. Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion that by leading young generation by encouraging them only for the cooperation and would argue that competition must be there to prepare the young people for better leadership in any area such as government, industry or other fields.
First of all, It is very difficult to find and filter a good leader from a large group of people. I would like to point out that, competetion is the best practice to find the people who can be a great leader. Let us take an example of a class test. The whole class is taught by the same teacher but when it comes to check for the knowledge pursued by the students, there are only few who pass the test. In this ciurcumstance, Obviously by testing the class, teacher can get to know about the level of the student. This is a helpful factor for the teacher to know about that on which student he/she needs to draw more attention for the student's better future.
In the Conclusion, although young people should taught to cooperate with each other, we can not deny the importance of the competetion. As long as some measurements are performed, author needs to give some proper data about the statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, thus, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 289.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80276816609 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70356718273 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557093425606 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6699100852 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139899833775 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483113178831 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421368952045 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078961938905 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487436547634 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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