Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The statement mentions about mandatory study abroad for at least one semester for students. It is true that studying in a different country can brings huge opportunities for students to learn a lot and grow their personalities; however, studying in a foreign country is expensive.
Consider how much money is requires to study in another country for one semester. Universities and government can help students with financial aid for tuition based on their income, but it still costs a lot of money for airplane tickets, living expenses, food, and clothes. For example, in California students usually need same type and amount of clothes for cold weather. But for Norway country in Europe, students really need warm clothes to be able to live there especially if they are not used to live in a very cold weather. In addition, it is expensive to pay rent even with roommates in different countries.
Additionally, it is not necessary to go far away to understand different cultures. Universities can make cultural events to make sure students learn about diverse nations. It is really easy these days because there are many international students in campuses. Or there even can be virtual events to make connections with other students in long distance. Imagine how easy students can communicate with other students and teachers by using facetime, email, and other technologies.
However, it can be a dream for every student to go to a foreign place to study despite the cost. There are many positive results for students. For example, students can be more independent person by living away from their families for a while. Also, they can get more adapted to different places and situations which is beneficial for their personalities and also for their future job environments. Another positive outcome is to have more interaction with others. And the most important part is to develop more learning skills from various teaching systems.
There are many opportunities about studying in a different country; however, colleges and universities should not require students to study at least one semester in a foreign place. Imagine how many of students would be able to afford it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'studying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: studying
.... Consider how much money is requires to study in another country for one semester. Un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, still, while, at least, for example, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13202247191 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83594231331 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497191011236 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2389334619 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.35 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269760043515 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862041453773 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728601175072 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174472191331 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642640419361 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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