Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The statement mentions about mandatory study abroad for at least one semester for students. It is true that studying in a different country where students can have huge opportunities to earn more knowledge and grow their personalities is every student’s dream; however, many expenses need to be considered before making such a decision.
Consider how much money requires to study in another country for one semester. Universities and government can help students with financial aid for tuition based on their income, but obviously academies cannot pay for airplane tickets, living expenses, food, and clothes for students. In California students usually need same type and amount of clothes for cold weather, but in Norway students really need warm clothes to be able to live there especially if they are not used to live in a very cold weather. In addition, it is expensive to pay rent even with roommates in different countries.
Additionally, it is not necessary to go far away to understand different cultures. Educational institutions can make cultural events to make sure students learn about diverse nations. It is really easy these days because there are many international students in campuses. Also, there even can be virtual events which can make connections with other students in long distance. Imagine how easy communication is with other students and teachers by using facetime, email, and other technologies.
However, it can be a dream for every student to go to a foreign place to study despite the cost because there are many positive results for students. For example, students can be more independent person by living away from their families for a while. Another positive outcome is to have more interaction with others and get more adapted to different places and situations which is beneficial for their personalities and also for their future job environments. And the most important part for students is to develop more learning skills from various learning equipment and teaching systems.
There are many opportunities about studying in a different country; however, educational institutions should not require students to study at least one semester in a foreign place. Imagine how many of students would not be able to afford it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'studying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: studying
...ion. Consider how much money requires to study in another country for one semester. Un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, while, at least, for example, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26243093923 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86869242571 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511049723757 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6501434625 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.058823529 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240457828084 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863026052673 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640993776823 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152262538554 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403922690107 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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