Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Student life is a phase where one can explore the world, learn various things practically and seek to look at a situation in different perspectives. The prompt recommends that colleges and universities should encourage foreign exchange programs and requires students to spend at least a semester studying in a foreign country. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this suggestion and argue that a student needs to look outward and explore opportunities while studying for two reasons.
To begin, the whole world comes together with various cultures and traditions from place to place. Sometimes, we can see different traditions, cultures or customs being followed in two adjacent towns. It is best to nurture one with such different cultures when they are at age of a student, this would allow them to have multiple virtues. Studying in a foreign country will make a student to be independent and seek lessons from his own life. For instance, if one gets an opportunity to study in a foreign university and he or she gets moved to the other country, they must look after their shelter, clothing, and food. This makes them learn how to live independently. Exploring and travelling in the foreign country would leave with different perspective to look at a society. Learn what is right and wrong. How to handle a situation etc. The above examples illustrate that how studying in a foreign place would open a student and gives wings to fly and not being ended up in a closed shell-like life.
Further, In the current technological world, the job market is expanding continuously world widely. Many cities in the different countries of the world have already become cosmopolitan. In such a world, the companies and corporates are looking out not only for talent but also for someone who can bring in different perspectives at work. For instance, if there are two students with same skill set appearing for job interviews out of which one had undergone foreign exchange program and other had completed all the course in the same local university. The chances of selecting would be higher for student who had completed one of the semesters in a foreign country. One needs to also look at governments when thinking of education in a foreign country along with colleges and universities, to provide easy loan process and lower interest rates for students.
Of course, some argue that in our increasingly globalized economy competition for jobs this would reduce opportunities to local students. However, isn’t this why colleges and universities should encourage their students to study at least a semester in foreign country. If we do so, students are likely to do the best job possible. Students are likely to compete at a highest level. They ’re likely to stand out a niche for ourselves in the “increasingly globalized world”.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e foreign exchange programs and requires students to spend at least a semester st...
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...such different cultures when they are at age of a student, this would allow them ...
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...ing ended up in a closed shell-like life living in a single city from birth to de...
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Suggestion: .
...ing in a single city from birth to death . Further, In the current technological ...
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Suggestion: the
...ible. Students are likely to compete at a highest level. They ’re likely to stand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while, at least, for instance, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2400.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 479.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01043841336 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84965884898 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492693110647 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 745.2 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0832499999 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9583333333 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70833333333 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237067204045 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713992820393 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783926340103 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167166891628 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383533732878 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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