Concentration on Grades
Being a top achiever in academics comes with many rewards. Many students in various levels of education strive to get high grades for the benefits it brings. The ambition for good results in schools seems like a totally good thing. However, concerns have been raised as to whether the competition among students to get top results undermines the sole purpose of learning, to learn a skill or gain knowledge. Competition for academic excellence among high school students improves their desire to learn.
Top ranking Universities require high grades t be considered for admission. Many high school students wishes is to be admitted in one of the most prestigious universities. There universities have set one of the highest admission requirements. Among the requirements are perfect scores in standardized tests. high school students who wish to get admitted to prestigious universities have to work extremely hard. Universities like Havard and Stanford are two of the most in demand universities. Their admission criteria is so strict. Students who have been admitted to these two universities testify that the desire to study at those universities motivated them to learn and work hard even more.
While the desire to get into prestigious universities may be a driving factor in increasing the quality of learning, good reputation for schools also plays a role in uplifting the standards of learning of that particular school. In many developed countries, such as in Canada. China, the top rated schools enjoy many benefits. Top ranked school receive the most research grants, for example, admit the brightest students in that country. Schools raise their standards in order to receive a top rating. In trying to raise their standards, schools awards high performing students with prizes and scholarships. In return, students who desire scholarships study and strive to learn all that is taught.
In addition to schools wanting a good reputation, Universities use grades to admit students for high demand study programs. Many universities have a limited number of students they can admit in a particular program of study. As a way to select the most qualified. Universities use grades obtained in high school standardized tests. Every year, over 7000 students apply for admission in Harvard law school and the program only admits 50 students a year. High school students and school are aware that in demand programs require good grades and the highest learning standards are required to achieve those grades.
that said the opposing view that placing so much emphasis on grades beats the purpose of learning. The main purpose is to learn or gain a skill. exams should only be used to measure our levels of understanding the materials learnt. The argument is that now exams have become so important and that schools are now focusing on getting their students to pass exams. However, this argument is flawed because exams need a level of understanding to pass. high achievers have proven to have fully grasped all the skills and knowledge accorded.
In conclusion, the competition for high grades in high school is a very good selection measure of admission in prestigious universities and it forces high schools to increase their standards for a good rating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2738.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 526.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20532319392 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84242086241 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433460076046 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 829.8 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.472622668 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9696969697 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9393939394 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 10.2758426966 224% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0675745143437 0.243740707755 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0243277577964 0.0831039109588 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482966895089 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480890364363 0.150359130593 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311311214006 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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