Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this op
I believe that artist have the rights to realize their creativity in whatever they would like to do, but the works with improper contents or meaning, such as sexual and violence should not be allowed.
Some governments try to impose the constraints on the art crafters to prevent their artwork from something adverse to their throne. They want to manipulate the freedom of the creativity to protect the reputation of government. For example, China limits the local writers that they couldn’t write anything detrimental to the regime, if they’re in that case, the publication would be not allowed.
However, the limitation really affects negatively on the articles, because most of them do not reflect the practical society but ingratiating toward the government. The value of the work has been so crucial not just because their beauty, but the reflection of a society. And the controlled one thought decimate the vivid and diversity of the artists creativities. For instance, the crafters in North Korea, through engraving the carving or sculptures of the dictator of the nation, show the adulation and greatness of their leadership and governments, rather than abundant with diversities artwork in a freedom kingdom.
Additionally, no restriction on the artwork is definitely an impetus for more people to express their thought, by this way, conceivably creators could express anything in their mind and the diversity grows. No matter the it’s correct or not, judge in later people, it is good for society to improve. People share their ideal with each other by their ideas and contend through rational debate and grow a best. That’s the basic of the democracy that today society flourish relying on. For example, the United State is a mixed cultures nation, it has been so potent because of diversity. Elites from different countries devote themselves in any aspects such as science, engineering and medicine, they have the best staffs in those field. Another instance from Google incorporation, they hire workers from different countries and emphasize the importance of the diversities. And this explain why it has been so powerful and successful as a top search engine in the world.
In conclusion, the freedom of the creativity is essential to be supported to grow diversity that is advantageous for human society, while some artworks with improper contents, by the extend of them, should be prohibited to prevent from negative effect on children or adolescents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23115577889 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83741661679 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55527638191 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5923693321 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.470588235 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4117647059 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242960309417 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663741844927 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595832919045 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143853633437 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534447085225 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.