"The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
To maximize profits each and every factor comes under consideration for the nation. In every day to day life profits play an important role for needs and ones satisfactory.
Firstly, when comes to the corporation field the main intention or the moto of their further development of their future plans based on their ideas is related to their present profits. The huge investments, work led by them looks simple though, but their hard work laid for them to overcome each and every obstacle leads to their destiny.
Secondly, when comes to their process which they laid ie foundation to transform a small ideas to successful project makes the national company to gain the profits. This successful projects leads to effect in nations GDP in form of increment as the multi national company's holds share market.
Whereas, the general welfare of the nation thinks that they are making a huge black money in means of projects they are being undertaken. In general, the people's mind set will be like the corporations are eating money from poor and they are developing. As when comes to share market if the project is successful only the share holders will get the profit.
Therefore, maximizing profits makes the general welfare of the nation proud, so there is no need to conflict corporate companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'In everyday'?
Suggestion: In everyday
...mes under consideration for the nation. In every day to day life profits play an important r...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'idea'?
Suggestion: idea
...laid ie foundation to transform a small ideas to successful project makes the nationa...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...increment as the multi national companys holds share market. Whereas, the gene...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tional companys holds share market. Whereas, the general welfare of the nation thin...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge black money'.
Suggestion: huge black money
... the nation thinks that they are making a huge black money in means of projects they are being und...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, as to, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 218.0 442.535393258 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00458715596 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55191447464 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 215.323595506 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591743119266 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0412628609 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.1 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10531907434 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051177573017 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473317017757 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731660466758 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548177925038 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.